BLACK vs Kesse
 

Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
etc...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-24-05 at 12:50 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

BLACK has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 10:51 AM.

im bout to do u in, like da mob did dat bitch named roy
killa? u jus santanin, u a dancin boy
im bout to spit in ya face for any remark u might say boy
i now u gone drop weak bars like u always do, youngin go play wit ya toys
i will shot u, not in a net way but lethal
my injection will leave u limpin like i seen u
u half way crook, i know dat u shook up from dis rock
so i cross over to tha next nigga dat dare to test tha prince of hip-hop

*im done. dont be scarred. i know i won already. NEXT!!!

Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 11:43 AM.

your just a typical newb, trashing around like you be owning this site
like it says in your name...in this battle theres no chance you'll see light
thank god for you though... you taught us bad equals sexy, real swell
but if what your saying is true, then your verse will be hot as hell
"license to kill", please, look at your record, nothing, no progress
for someone with that little posts....the shit coming out is at an excess
if whackness was a plague, then man, you were severely stricken
and your rhymes are like a poor mans cupboards....merely slim pickens
what makes the perfect song, shit buddy, you wouldn't have a clue
but i'll tell what makes the worst verse....DUH!! anything by you
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explans: check pro for 5th, everthin else easy
gl

uppppppin......................................... ............:)

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

heres my feeds:

STYLE:
sorry BLACK, didnt feel anything from ur rhymes, Kesse had something, tho u both were almost writing plain out sentences, rather than dropping verses

PUNCH:
a dancing boy with toys who limps, couldve came out worse than it is, if i was kesse i surely wont be "shook up"; good work by Kesse tho, lines werent as predictable as black's, which is a good thing

FLOW:
black, did u actually recite what u wrote? besides the lack of flow from setup lines to punchlines, i simply couldnt connect the pieces together; kesse had the better overall flow, but also lacks rhythm in single lines

TECHNIQUE:
decent wording from both... personally i liked the references used by kesse and the way u ended ur drop

S: Kesse > BLACK
P: Kesse > BLACK
F: Kesse > BLACK
T: Kesse > BLACK
OVERALL: BLACK, u couldve definitely done some more damage than u did with the ideas u had, but Kesse had u played out
VOTE: i stiLL cant... but wouldve been for Kesse

Voted For: Kesse

haha black watch your mouth ... keese you took this one easyyyyyy i really shouldn't have to explain this shit but o well..one of your punches hit harder than his whole drop ha but yea you kept your shit st8 the whole way through

punches//k
metas//k
opener and in this case closer//k
structure//k


Vote//Keese

keese find some new ppl to battle haha you always pick these wacklings haha

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

Checkin the polls.........

BLACK:
You need ta elevate an get some better vocab homie, an work on being more creative with ya punches, cause punches win you batles

Kesse:
You got this, 4sho'....but you gotta get too the point quicker in your rhymes, some of ya lines seemed a little stretched, read over ya verse before ya post it an try an rmeove some uneeded words, ya know?

Good drop from both...
Not gonna vote tho'..just givin y'all my opinnon, but I'd be suprized if Kesse aint winning when i check the polls

Peace

^ word, thanks fo feeds....haha, im not choosin these peeps, they keep callin me out..

yall niggaz stupid or somethin?
i won dis battle flat out
dat nigga k aint even ryhme. let alone have a flow
i am tha best. PERIOD

^ahaha, holy shit you make me laugh, i dont think you know what flow is....and you suck, PERIOD....your goin to get K'0ed in all your battles, period.

.............uppppin..............................

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