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MaRVJay1009 vs black
Battle Rules:
10-16 lines... 3 votes=tko no swayin No Crew or hate Votes No Recycling No Biting lets go fam Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 02-24-05 at 01:06 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. DQ'ed - more than 5 active battles open |
BLACK has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 11:27 AM.
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im bout to murk u too, dis battle is easy, im focused
takin out ya "vets" like a mad dog was lurkin u should learn some respect for dis kid got u limp walkin round like u jus did a suicide attimp u dont wanna battle? okay its ur loss im slim thug jr, im a national boss no coin toss cuz i get tha first drop, first win dis gone be a tko, brought onto anotha nigga again *hold up, let me think okay, im comin of da dome like porn stars do before they fuck honestly i didnt think u would wanna battle, thought u was a duck im destine to take out every emcees and lastly leave nothin but me for battle tips, i could let u see but i'll charge u a hefty fee u scared of me, jus like dolla-bill is dis kid named jay is a starved kid, give him some food im stompin all over u like timbos do strap up and get prepared for ur 10th time to lose *i murked him. im tha best. no otha way to put it! |
MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 11:42 AM.
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look.....
i all figured dis cat style...he's a pussy but still act wild.... if he had a "kid" call me "50 cent" cuzz ima wan kill "black-child" shook u cant stand da be still like some1 gave dis man a E-pill yeah u'll probly land a weak deal,afta dat u'll b a fan of me still u winnin dis?...can it be? nope! marvjay i damage weak skillz... if "eminem" aint say it on a record i would of neva heard of aMyTViLLE datz sad...he's a noob rv dis bitch lier aint neva spit fire.... black said he aint gay but did a open mic 4 tha dickridaz i know u hatin me now all da talk tuff talk aint fazin me clown ya flow known da get more than lazy a round..................... cuzz nigga ur "garbage" like where "brenda's baby was found" da establishment,dis fag a be ova joyed just da say he was down im keyin dis up laughin....at ya rappin u'll neva get betta cuzz can u recall ya last win? no! ur not has been cuzz u neva was i aint cool guy i'll pull da mac out blow ya back out so wild!... throw ya raps out u'll neva get "light" ima call u "black-out" 4 now explinations... 3rd bar-he's from amytville...and remember dat EM track when he was talkin bout amytville datz da only time i heard of dat shit 4thbar-just click da link..he did a open mic 4 tha dickridaz 6th bar-remember pac song brenda's gota baby..u'll get it |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Jay-had good structure very good punches sometime your flow waz off but you put effort into dis on Black-it waz good at first den it feel off and you shud fix your structure try to make every line the same length it makes it easier to read |
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stop writtin pre-writtens nigga. spit off tha dome like i did. dats tha only reason u might win nigga, u prewrittin bastard of a bitch
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^^^why would i write a bar 4 ya corny ass lmaooo...datz all off da top famron u madd cuzz ya shit was extra trash
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
marv won this based on punches, personals, wordplay and vocab, the structure and flow went to black yo.. fav lines- datz sad...he's a noob rv dis bitch lier aint neva spit fire.... black said he aint gay but did a open mic 4 tha dickridaz vote- marv jay based on punches and personals |
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lol, how come Technical is ridin you Marv? i'm not saying i beat you, an he did explain the vote, but uhmmm, its a little weird how he is choosing ta vote on just your battles huh
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y r u watchin niggaz like dat....i voted on his battle and asked him 2 return da honest vote and he did so pleez fall back
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I aint watchin nobody, it popped up on the main forum, thats what happens when you post on this site lol, an anyway i was just saying its a little weird how he goes an votes for you in 2 battles like that, but like i said, no hate, an i'm not implying anythin, its just....a Coincidence, thats all *shakes my head*
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