Need critic on my newest joint, suacide
 

i started a thred in culture talking about hapyness and shid, that all led me to do this joint. Its a litle shakey so please give feedback

Song is "Suacide" and peepit on www.mp3.com/Ibro

tx, stay smoken

Yo I liked that, it had that premo-esque sound to it, while not biting his style - it's one of those beats that just begs for a cat to spit something with meaning over it, something deep, nice one. Only prob was, you could hardly hear the lyrics over the music, so I suggest altering that in the EQ or mixer....but apart from that, v. ill!

tx for the heads up dog,

upin

upin

yeah, the beat was hot, deep and flow, with an emotional tip to it. the kind that makes u sit back and think. nice one.
Peace,
Slim

that 509 lyricist track was ill. beat was hot, and flow from the emcee was tight too. nice track.

i love that shit Ibro...looking forward to hearing ya in tha tournament... i think that the music was a lil too loud, cuz i could hear you clear and all but the piano keyz noise was making it hard to keep a lock on ya voice. stay cool - elevate!

tx for all the responses fellas, oh yeah the 509 Lyricist that was an ill joint, the flow with rz was almoust perfect. Yeah i definately need to adjust the tone.