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Venomous 02-24-05 04:33 PM

Fading Cliches
 
They say cooler heads prevail so Im as calm as it gets/
Is this a threat or a promise, am I promising threats/
Keep friends close and foes closer till you notice it when/
Your sworn enemies have found their way close to your friends/
Live by the gun die by the gun, reach if ya packin/
Actions speak louder than words but can you speak for them actions/
Is it better to have loved and lost then never loved at all/
What if you lost ya love for something special then what is the call/
A picture’s worth a thousand words my words are worth a thousand pictures/
Can you picture that, if not looks like I haven’t found the mixture/
The truth hurts but sets you free but never free from the pain/
But you know what they say that’s the only way of achieving a gain/
They say be true yet be different, what the heck is the norm/
Then they say get woth the program you’d better reform/
Yo they say this and that, and it’s the sayings we say/
That lost meaning over time nothing but fading clichés/

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no competition 02-24-05 06:23 PM

it'z ight but u need 2 elevate more work on ur structure & add more in depth wordplay in ur pieces 4 future references ight no hate


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