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CeleriTy vs RiDiKiLLoZ
Battle Rules:
8 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-24-05 at 07:22 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
RiDiKiLLoZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 05:56 PM.
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Whatup gangsta, welcome to my first battle, time is 5:56
Didnt expect a first timer to burst finer lines while ur suckin some dick? Thats cool, dont choke, iLL wait tiLL that thing's outa ur face Too bad it's too late, u didnt know that dude's got AIDS. Celerity, short of celebrity, thinks hes reppin The Council In reality, tell you with clarity, ur stiLL stroking that pencil! Tell you what, here iLL give you 2 ground-pointing thumbs You can lickem when ur mouth's clear of my poundful of cum. |
CeleriTy has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 06:59 PM.
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dawg you straight pussy....you should know you cooter in this battle your sure to fall over...like fat kids on motor scooters i dont like to fight.. but my words'll leave ya face down in the concrete.. after reading my verse.. you'll be more shook up then 60 year old muhhamad ali you can call me kobe bryant.. cause im the Ridikilloz raper.. its like im taking a shit kid.. cause you get ripped quicker than toilet paper.. you could be a gymnyst.. and dawg you still couldnt flip your shit.. u must be stupid to set up a battle with cel.. shits just ridiculous... omg peeps im sorry this is so wack.. im having major writers block... |
dawg you straight pussy....you should know you cooter in this battle your sure to fall over...like fat kids on motor scooters i dont like to fight.. but my words'll leave ya face down in the concrete.. after reading my verse.. you'll be more shook up then 60 year old muhhamad ali you can call me kobe bryant.. cause im the Ridikilloz raper.. its like im taking a shit kid.. cause you get ripped quicker than toilet paper.. you could be a gymnyst.. and dawg you still couldnt flip your shit.. u must be stupid to set up a battle with cel.. shits just ridiculous... omg peeps im sorry this is so wack.. im having major writers block... |
blahh upping this.. ..............................
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Voted For: CeleriTy
ima give it to selerity since he bust straight ta da chase...naw sayin...both had good flow and structure was ok here....but punches i give ta celerity although they were'nt dat good... v/celerity Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upping............................................ ..
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Voted For: CeleriTy
Celerity- no need to apologive, we've all been there, but in this case it didn't really matter..u had nice flow, very easy to follow...i liked ur ali meta...and ur kobe reference..ur verse was pretty good RiDiKiLLoZ - most of ur lines were played..council and pencil dont rhyme...neither do face and aids...ur punches were weak...keep workin on ur punches and up the complexity of ur verses. v/ Celerity Return The Favor...Link In My Sig |
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