new threat...
 

finna shut down the boards wit this keystyle real quick....

you cats need to improve-a-lot before tools-get-sparked, call me 'acne' cleanser
the way i make you lose-ya-'spot', school dudes until these fools-get-taught,
let ya girl 'ride' like an amusement-park.
been on the site for a couple second's and finna catch-some-rep,i'll hold the
tech-till-death, blow ya lungs in the air....now you can 'catch'-ya-breath,
no advice hear you can help-ya-self,im taking turfs land-by-land,
going to hand-to-hand, leave cats shaking like a bad camera-man,
'brave' like an atlanta-fan, kid i can handle-grams, dog im buck wild i aint
in to actin-quiet, starting rapping-riot, on the corner losing wieght like the
atkins-diet. imma 4-shooter, wit galore-bhudda, hore-abuser, beat up folk who
aint winning....now dats a 'sore-'loser...


a quick freestyle.....uppin 4 feedback and tryien to see wut the sites about...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178712

he speaks....
 

returning the favor,


decent wordplay, multies were on point but they woulda had more emphasis if you changed your paragraph font, overall it was nice for a key, the sore looser at the end was a nice closer, the acni cleanser line was a nice concept as well.

-gully