Skriptz vs Buck.Shot
 

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An Strobe said.....
In Order for a battle ta not be closed because i currently have 5 open battles, i gotta state that i cant be dq'ed for that rule :D

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Check in by: 02-25-05 at 09:29 PM

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Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-25-05 09:09 PM.

Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-25-05 09:11 PM.

This kid aint no ''Real'' emcee, he's a Whack ''Shady''
He was Conceived by Bobby n Whitney, the Boys a Crack Baby
Yeah you do hate me, But i Wonder Why?
U Just a fuckin herb that buzzes around rv like a Housefly..
We all know you gonna Deny, but kid you do Cheat
Couldnt ''Serve'' Ya ''Punces'' for Lunches as Hobo 'Meat'
It aint that you Untouchable, its nobody wants to Touch
your on every thread like my shadow....
.............................Obsessed much?

Ah, this kid is battling me again… be he’s still a non-vet
Said he has skills… to bad it hasn’t really been found yet
You’re far from dope, man… so you might as well quit*
I told him that his punches were chappy…
……………………………… so he went on and licked his lips
He thinks he’s a textcee… shit… I’ll smack you with a MIC
Threw his punches in the air… and he thinks they took flight
I’ll slap this bitch around… and watch this homo get pissed
Said he’s coming at me with punches… that never even exist

Key’d

*his other name was Dopeman

don’t get it? Don’t vote…

Ah, this kid is battling me again… but he’s still a non-vet
Said he has skills… to bad it hasn’t really been found yet
You’re far from dope, man… so you might as well quit*
I told him that his punches were chappy…
……………………………… so he went on and licked his lips
He thinks he’s a textcee… shit… I’ll smack you with a MIC
Threw his punches in the air… and he thinks they took flight
I’ll slap this bitch around… and watch this homo get pissed
Said he’s coming at me with punches… that never even exist

Key’d

*his other name was Dopeman

don’t get it? Don’t vote…

w/e...uppin this

Voted For: Skriptz

omg.. i hope that verse really wasnt key'd.. cause if it was. i feel bad for dopeman.. i mean skriptz u had dope punches the whole way thru.. i liked the chapped lips line.. it was pretty nice dope man u need to learn what a REAL punch is.. cause dawg.. ur whole verse in that was filler.. u really only had 1 nice punch that battle.. skriptz is just on a much higher level then u no hate.. u just gotta elevate man.. both had nice flow the whole way thru.. neither had alot of personals.. both had nice structure.. just the witty and creativiness gives skriptz the win.. pz..

This was feedback posted for Skriptz
 

skriptz fucking owned this battle....dopeman was wack in this....

This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
 

checkin polls.....NOK hoes....if u not wit it get filled wit holes...

ohh, that was dope...lmao...j/p

good shit yall...just reading shit...no comment really. just keep elevating...and yall structure both fell off once, but it was still a close battle...

~1~

This was feedback posted for Skriptz
 

Skriptz won this easily...........................

What suprize that Skriptz dickridin ho'z say some bullshit like ''Skriptz won an he won because i suck his dick on AIM''

Uppin for votes

i wasn't even on aim the other day...mayn shut up...

gettin more loses than your wins..ur pathetic...

Voted For: Skriptz

Buck-

Aiight mane, good flow. Nice lil wordplays. Punches was kinda "eh" balanced. But either way nice verse with good flow and punches...........plus wordplays


Skritpz-

Aiiight good flow, nice decent punches. Didn't see any wordplays, but the punches is wat stood out in your verse. Nice meta'z.


Overall=Ok battle. Buck your punches was kinda balanced, with good and bad........Stretch lines but that dont matter. Wordplay's was good. You had some good punches, and with some bad ones......But keep it up fam. Skriptz Your punches was hard and decent......flowed pretty well, nice meta'z. My vote goes to skriptz cause his punches hit way harder, buck your's was effective but still didn't have enough to come up with the win. wun

Voted For: Skriptz

This kid aint no ''Real'' emcee, he's a Whack ''Shady''
He was Conceived by Bobby n Whitney, the Boys a Crack Baby
...aiiiiight punch, not great, but decent
Yeah you do hate me, But i Wonder Why?
U Just a fuckin herb that buzzes around rv like a Housefly..
......bar put a funny pic in my head of skript as a fly
We all know you gonna Deny, but kid you do Cheat
Couldnt ''Serve'' Ya ''Punces'' for Lunches as Hobo 'Meat'
......good bar i like the punch for sum reason
It aint that you Untouchable, its nobody wants to Touch
your on every thread like my shadow....
.............................Obsessed much?
...closer was ok you aint try on this bar
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Ah, this kid is battling me again… but he’s still a non-vet
Said he has skills… to bad it hasn’t really been found yet
...aiight bar not original but decent
You’re far from dope, man… so you might as well quit*
I told him that his punches were chappy…
……………………………… so he went on and licked his lips
....nice punch best of battle
He thinks he’s a textcee… shit… I’ll smack you with a MIC
Threw his punches in the air… and he thinks they took flight
......good bar, good meta, overall good
I’ll slap this bitch around… and watch this homo get pissed
Said he’s coming at me with punches… that never even exist
......pretty good line, kinda basic though
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honestly this was a close battle, so i based my vote on enjoyability and slightly enjoyed skriptz shit more, no hate
buck, u came good too

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