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-hisTRYwreCKEr- v/s -AMEND-

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hisTRYwrECKer why the Antic's ~ Ya Know How i Feel About Bitch-Shit, I Cant-Stand-It//
ya OppoZichun gets Damaged ~ the Wack Emcee's, just wreCKed-in-pHraNtiKs//
Ya Whole Verse Wasnt Big-Enough ~ Droppin Shit, Now Pick-It-Up//
It Looked Like Edward Scissor Hand Rollin-Up The Way i Slit-Ya-Up//
You Spittin Played Shit ~ How Many Times You Done Brought Up Bin-Ladin//
I Dont Give A Fuck What-You-Say ~ My Shit Would Be Iller Even In Pig-Latin//
YA Stepped Up To Battle With a Stiff aIM ~ then I Broke Ya Ankles//
If You Ever Became Phat and Measured Up ~ you Musta Broke-The-Angles//
Like Clock-Work, Ya Times Fixed ~ AMEND Lays it Down, ya Hands-High//
want Truth, ya Ryhmes Shit ~ and this is UnConcluded so Stand-By//

*DR MC PLUS walks in and DAMN another wack white boy, and no he iz not emphisizing his race but his SKILL*

I'll spray lyrical vaccines on ur unknown land~but before that i'll leav u in tha crop//HAHA
Goin to a Six-Flags~Tha only way u'll make a decent drop//
Makin u pop antiwackness pills~My bad they just advilz//
I'ma drop shyt on u like u da coyote~like 100 ton anvilz//
Damn another white wanna be jockin slim shady~AND I THOUGHT STAN WAS KILLED//
Postin orgasisms in your rhymes, and porn as your cover~tha only way your listenerz get thrilled//
I'm pickin up my vocab outta my dictionary//
Wackness ain't that u~Oh shyt this my pictionary//blah
I'll leave this white boy sunburned wit hot lyrics like he surfed~like each and every//
Thought I was really gonna collab wit u!?!?!?~I just wanted to pick your gurlz cherry//

*walks out like DAMN since when was there another WACK SLIM SHADY*

Tough battle. Why couldn't one of ya'll just suck?!? Hmm...Well..Amend had personals. Wrecker had more word play. Um.. both had flow. Punches were..ehhh. Um..I think dat Wrecker took this shit wit his wordplay. Holla.

VOTE= hisTRYwreCKEr

ummmm basically

shhe said some of the shit i was

this was a nice battle

yah both versus where nice to nices punches from both made me keep readind the whole verse instead of skippin good

my vote goes to histry

i like both yalls verses my favorite line from amends was ya OppoZichun gets Damaged ~ the Wack Emcee's, just wreCKed-in-pHraNtiKs//
and from wreckr
I'll leave this white boy sunburned wit hot lyrics like he surfed~like each and every//
Thought I was really gonna collab wit u!?!?!?~I just wanted to pick your gurlz cherry//

i picke this battle out by the ending and wreckr came harder so my vote=histrwreckr

YO IMMA GO WITH AMEND I LIKE HIS INNER RHYMIN AND HYSTY DDINT MAKE SENSE SUM OF THE TIME RATHER WEAK BATTLE BUT AMEND GOT IT IN MY EYES

It Looked Like Edward Scissor Hand Rollin-Up The Way i Slit-Ya-Up//

THIS WAS PRETTY ILL

Makin u pop antiwackness pills~My bad they just advilz//

UM HOW WACK N SIMPLE CAN U GET

N E WAY AMEND GOTS THIS

Quote:

hisTRYwrECKer why the Antic's ~ Ya Know How i Feel About Bitch-Shit, I Cant-Stand-It//
ya OppoZichun gets Damaged ~ the Wack Emcee's, just wreCKed-in-pHraNtiKs//
Ok opener.. Good multi
Ya Whole Verse Wasnt Big-Enough ~ Droppin Shit, Now Pick-It-Up//
It Looked Like Edward Scissor Hand Rollin-Up The Way i Slit-Ya-Up//
Decent punch
You Spittin Played Shit ~ How Many Times You Done Brought Up Bin-Ladin//
I Dont Give A Fuck What-You-Say ~ My Shit Would Be Iller Even In Pig-Latin//
lost the flow, but follow through bar was tight
YA Stepped Up To Battle With a Stiff aIM ~ then I Broke Ya Ankles//
If You Ever Became Phat and Measured Up ~ you Musta Broke-The-Angles//
lol
Like Clock-Work, Ya Times Fixed ~ AMEND Lays it Down, ya Hands-High//
want Truth, ya Ryhmes Shit ~ and this is UnConcluded so Stand-By//
not a bad ender[quote]
Over all pretty good verse.. only lost the flow once, good metaphors in it, Punchs were good but not that personal. Over all Like an 8 for a verse

hisTRYwreCKEr

[quote]
I'll spray lyrical vaccines on ur unknown land~but before that i'll leav u in tha crop//HAHA
Goin to a Six-Flags~Tha only way u'll make a decent drop//
good opener.. Sixflags part was nice
Makin u pop antiwackness pills~My bad they just advilz//
I'ma drop shyt on u like u da coyote~like 100 ton anvilz//
good, But the double Like things pissin me off,lol
Damn another white wanna be jockin slim shady~AND I THOUGHT STAN WAS KILLED//
Postin orgasisms in your rhymes, and porn as your cover~tha only way your listenerz get thrilled//
Lmao, that was dope
I'm pickin up my vocab outta my dictionary//
Wackness ain't that u~Oh shyt this my pictionary//blah
eh..
I'll leave this white boy sunburned wit hot lyrics like he surfed~like each and every//
Thought I was really gonna collab wit u!?!?!?~I just wanted to pick your gurlz cherry//
once again.. eh.. follow though bar was ok, begginer could been better..

Over all about an 8 fora verse... Good metas, nice punchs..
Rhyme scheme was ok, vocab was ok..

1/2 an 5/6 bars were the ones that took it for me..

vote= hisTRYwreCKEr

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Amend Got Beat By A Newbie..? Ahh Man..Vote = Histrey Wrecker..

LoL damn Amend your losing it dawg......

LoL..

thats what i get for spending my time tryin to elevate my audioness....

lol oh well, good ish Histry

damn,everyone falls off everyonce in awhile,audio is more more important than text anyways.....