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*holly$wood* vs schema
Battle Rules:
5-7 Lines No Crew Votes No D/R No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-26-05 at 01:54 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-26-05 01:28 PM.
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fuck a newbie...you're skills is ass like round roast...
youre high up on the wack scale...im down around dope... this clown has found hope...battlin a legend... asked him how many lines he could stand he said seven... this herb ass must need new glasses...fact is... im 50 times better than ya ass is...and thats with... the benefit of the doubt...im dumbin out...drop ya shit son...time and youre luck's runnin out... |
*holly$wood* has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-26-05 01:49 PM.
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Wit ya christian "mentallity" have you crusified wit black "brutality" cuz like wit war we lack NEUTRALITY//
Like salt to da open~wound i leave ya skin 'tinglin' so you groap~ya~crew// like erosion of ya foundation ya aint on solid ground an ya throat~goin~spew// Like clora~phorm~to~da~pope put ya down like fat basterd usin poor~form~on~da~rope// Crew sorely formed da~losses~day~cant~cope got you chokin like Ca~losas~dick~ramed~ya~throat// And like prison cells MY~bars~surround~you, Wit me spittin ya praise da~cops~dat~found~you// Least in a padded room u have a since~of~security,[Black's Label] me da [king] cuz you lack inginuity// MY label goin bleed thru leave ya sound 'metallic' so you cant even Fade~to~black// Got is 'heart' lock'd on 'Diamondz' he 'club' thru da cement but its a Spade~he~lack// |
This was feedback posted for schema
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179053
^^ hollywood your a biter mane...........You just posted this in my call out thread........now in this battle is whoa totally different........different style.......... |
Voted For: *holly$wood*
fuck a newbie...you're skills is ass like round roast... youre high up on the wack scale...im down around dope... this clown has found hope...battlin a legend... asked him how many lines he could stand he said seven... this herb ass must need new glasses...fact is... im 50 times better than ya ass is...and thats with... the benefit of the doubt...im dumbin out...drop ya shit son...time and youre luck's runnin out... *****ok schema you nice but....you aint try halfway on this! i dont even think d/r's would accept this from you, alot of self glorify and underestimating in this one . . . . Like salt to da open~wound i leave ya skin 'tinglin' so you groap~ya~crew// like erosion of ya foundation ya aint on solid ground an ya throat~goin~spew// ...work on the struc but creative line here Like clora~phorm~to~da~pope put ya down like fat basterd usin poor~form~on~da~rope// Crew sorely formed da~losses~day~cant~cope got you chokin like Ca~losas~dick~ramed~ya~throat ...seriously work on ya form nice vocab, nice multis but its hard to flow.. .. . . . . overall both verse had faults, schema was hell simple and holly verse was messed up but overal gotta give it to holly for the simple fact he tried and dont wanna give the impression dat newbs can never bet vets who dont try v/holly |
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Voted For: schema
this is pretty simple........... schema won plainly.......he didnt put in a lot of effort....probably because...he didnt have to...against this newb....no offense though.....hollywood u just have bad structer and overextende punches....u basicly wrote the same way all newbs wright.....just werk on the struc and the lines.....they dont have to be that long to be dope...... v /schema |
This was feedback posted for schema
hollywood is DQ'd for going over the line limit
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This was feedback posted for schema
I'm not voting for any1 as this is a weak and whack as hell battle. Elevate people
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Voted For: schema
s-chema killed this.. no doubt about it.. nice punches and flow the holw way thru.. cept for the closer wtf is wit dat.. other kid's verse was wrong.. structure was jacked up. i had a lil trouble reading it.. and it made pretty much no sense the whole way thru.. didnt flow no personals or punches.. and on the other hand schema really had no personals either but came hard the whole way thru with punches,multi's.. hmmmmmm vote schema.. |
Voted For: schema
um wow this battle was not wat i expected from schema by the way hot sig schema good sctructure punches- was type wack personals- read the above metas-none Hollywood structure-omg fix that shit up man it was bad punches-were cool lines-part of structure but goddamn those are unexplanable them lines were so crooked the fab 5 would wanna turn staraight vote-schema |
Voted For: *holly$wood*
[/color=blue]Eh...One Sided Battle Really Yo.. Punches- I Honestly Thought Holly Had Better Punches..Schema U Only Had Like One Affective Punch.. Personals- None Of Yall Really Wordplay- I Liked Holly's Wordplay..Schema U Aint Really So Much Of This At All.. Structure- Schema..Holly Ya Shit Be All Ova The Fuckin Place..Work On Dat Yo.. Flow- Eh..I Liked Schema's Flow Betta...Holly Ya Structure Affected Ya Flow Obviously.. Closer- Holly Had This..His Closer Was More Of A Punch..Even Though The Fade To Black Line..Is Played As Hell Now-a-Days.. Vote- Holly..[/color] |
Voted For: schema
no need ta explain my vote...schema got dis..structure was betta..punches came a lil harda....flow was good both ends...wordplay was decent from hollywood...same wit schema... v/schema |
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