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Ysdat 02-26-05 11:46 PM

my hip hop mindstate
 
executives in the game only care for them self
commercailising our heritage to overcome there wealth
they use it without a fuck for the meaning behind it
we need to elevate,escalate,then look for the truth...find it.
when my heart and brains in allignment,its a beautiful scene
but the producers these days simply sellout,jus to get the c.r.e.a.m
I had a dream of rap back when it first began............


*falls asleep*


love filling the air,Im seeing a side of rap i could never expose
Im laying back,watching young mc...when all of a sudden my brain arose
this is incredible,credential..so suspencefull,this is past tense though
i keep drifting through hip hops previous,no such things as a violent rhyme
the code of the streets stays real,not to be voiced...love for a silent crime
lifestyles are true...new...never contridicted,not stricken with rage
as i look at a rhyme book,wisdom is thick in the page
its not about the beat,the money,tryna be the best.
its simply the love for music,life no need for less
as I hear hip hops heart pound,giving one last attempt to survive
I snap back to the future...were hip hops deprived.

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So my mind starts to drift in a blurry of mixed emotions
guys looking at hip hop with fixed devotions
Im strickly roasting the media for there input in the game
helped in one way...yet stript it,killed,ripped it of brain
I cant blame them,money is to tempting these days
anything thats develop's minimal interest,we pay
its as if money is replacing religion to a certain extent
hop hops youth is lost,it should be hurt and repent
re-sent back to its child hood days,to rediscover its self
back before the time,were it relised it can uncover some wealth

jus a quick thing I wrote after taking a serious view on hip hops position.

Da_Throwdest 02-27-05 09:49 AM

this 1 was very good & deep i liked it u got emotions all thru it & elaborated on certain parts of hip-hop u feel r b'in left out overall 9.5/10 keep it up

Ysdat 02-27-05 11:25 PM

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Ysdat 03-03-05 10:50 PM

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~Sundance Kid~ 03-04-05 08:08 AM

This peice was deep and had truth in your lines. Good structure and has good flows with some good vocab. Clean peice.... :thumbup:

Ysdat 03-04-05 03:56 PM

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Ysdat 03-05-05 07:24 PM

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Ysdat 03-07-05 10:53 PM

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