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Lord.Wun vs Khaos_daRenegade
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 02-27-05 at 12:55 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Khaos_daRenegade has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 12:49 PM.
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Lord.Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 12:50 PM.
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Fuck i got writers block today....
Nigga Face Facts..Even with a stockin Cap..you couldnt get Waves Spittin Flames..and if your lucky, ill dig a hole next ya Grandpas' grave Fuck It, i got writers block...Still, like Fiends..Im handin him "L's".. You Know This kides a premature bitch, when he gets pissed on, By kelz But Nigga Its Finished...the next 6 lines...Shit, I dont even need em.. Even his Motha Thinks Hes wack..check his battle stats if u dun believe em im laughin right now...this dude accually think he talented....What! If thats so then im god...Cause this nigga Khaos.....is straight Butt.. You see Kon scores more points..then the starting lineup in the allstar game Gettin K'od..in 50 seconds subtract from 60, .......................so enjoy your 10 seconds of fame.. |
im tired of these new kids, so lord wun is bout to get murked...
after dis battle yo fuckin losing streak'll neva revert... see sqirt, u got a funny flow wit no flow or delivery... my punches connect to yo cranium and u'll be losin memory... i think u kinda ill dawg..sike i dont mean to bubble u... cuz in reality, sayin ya ABC's is the only way u'll get a W.. Kid run while ya can, since ya future's too bleek... n' im'a call you 7 days, cuz everythin bout you'z weak... |
Voted For: Lord.Wun
see sqirt, u got a funny flow wit no flow or delivery... my punches connect to yo cranium and u'll be losin memory... ..DOESNT REALLY RHYME, NO DISS i think u kinda ill dawg..sike i dont mean to bubble u... cuz in reality, sayin ya ABC's is the only way u'll get a W.. ...FUNNY BUT I HEARD THAT B4 Kid run while ya can, since ya future's too bleek... n' im'a call you 7 days, cuz everythin bout you'z weak ..NOW THAT IS DEFLLY PLAYED, YO, U AIIGHT, BUT WHAT U NEED TO DO IS THINK B4 U POST A PUNCH, LIKE, HMMM, DOES DIS SOUND TOO BASIC? OR PLAYED...IF IT DOES, CHANCES R IT IS... Nigga Face Facts..Even with a stockin Cap..you couldnt get Waves Spittin Flames..and if your lucky, ill dig a hole next ya Grandpas' grave NOT REALLY DIGGIN Fuck It, i got writers block...Still, like Fiends..Im handin him "L's".. You Know This kides a premature bitch, when he gets pissed on, By kelz YOU TOOK A PLAYED CONCEPT AND MADE IT GOOD But Nigga Its Finished...the next 6 lines...Shit, I dont even need em.. Even his Motha Thinks Hes wack..check his battle stats if u dun believe em ...FUNNY DIS, NOT REALLY A PUNCH MORE LIKE DISS OVERALL LORD GOT THIS NO HATE, JUST ELEVATE, return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=178800 |
This was feedback posted for Lord.Wun
checkin pollz........
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Voted For: Lord.Wun
Aight, Noty a bad battle Lord ya had some dope shit in there, killer was nice, ya had some dope wordplay too, feelin ya shit 4real real, nice shit Khaos, ya verse lacked creativity dogg, ya needed ta have more original wordplay an ya vocab was a little off Work on hittin punches an bein more creative in your lines Return the fave in any of my battpes ya see floatin around Peace |
uppin this battle...
. . . 2-0 me...uppin to KO this sucka |
man lord wun yo verse was garbage as fuck uppin dis shit for some real votes
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Voted For: Lord.Wun
ight in my opinion this was an 1-sided battle khoas- ight, ur structure was ok not the best..punches lacked the effectiveness 2 hit hard..not many personals..no multi's...overall ur rap scheme is lame & needs improvement & elevation no hate lord.wun- ight, ur structure was alot betta then khoas's.. great punches that hit hard..many personals thru out..sum multi's..overall ur style of battlin' & eva win in all catergories won u my vote V/ Lord.Wun make sure 2 return the favor |
Voted For: Lord.Wun
aight Khaos-Ya shit was toooooo simple ya gotta elevate had me not laugihn or nuttin LW- you had me laughin at points and ish you won merely cuz u had better punches connectin both elevate tho |
Voted For: Lord.Wun
wun got this 4sho... Came sick with the multies an a few decent personals here n there, punches were nice too, overrall besides the way u structure your rhymes, there aint much i can fault, nice verse....9/10 khoas l, ya structure was everywhere too dont seperate bars like that man gotta be more creative with the rhymes u choose ta use Overall 6/10 no hate, just be more creative wun got this for the overrall better verse RTF In ANY of my battles ya see floatin around on front lines or whatever Thanks links in sig http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=181254 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=175227 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Lord.Wun
Nigga Face Facts..Even with a stockin Cap..you couldnt get Waves Spittin Flames..and if your lucky, ill dig a hole next ya Grandpas' grave nah, weak punch Fuck It, i got writers block...Still, like Fiends..Im handin him "L's".. You Know This kides a premature bitch, when he gets pissed on, By kelz weak shit here But Nigga Its Finished...the next 6 lines...Shit, I dont even need em.. Even his Motha Thinks Hes wack..check his battle stats if u dun believe em decent im laughin right now...this dude accually think he talented....What! If thats so then im god...Cause this nigga Khaos.....is straight Butt.. no, wackest punch yet You see Kon scores more points..then the starting lineup in the allstar game Gettin K'od..in 50 seconds subtract from 60, .......................so enjoy your 10 seconds of fame.. okay im tired of these new kids, so lord wun is bout to get murked... after dis battle yo fuckin losing streak'll neva revert... nah, not hard enuff see sqirt, u got a funny flow wit no flow or delivery... my punches connect to yo cranium and u'll be losin memory... nope, not good i think u kinda ill dawg..sike i dont mean to bubble u... cuz in reality, sayin ya ABC's is the only way u'll get a W.. decent Kid run while ya can, since ya future's too bleek... n' im'a call you 7 days, cuz everythin bout you'z weak... nah overall this battle was weak here, but lord.wun took this one, just came less wack in this battle tho |
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