Whats up with the world?
Im a cocky nigga with arrogance but with a mind that explores wherever it needs to be. From the clubbin to slavery I dont stop u get me. Ill post summin ive been workin on:
Verse 1 People jus lie cheat n deceve my story so big, its hard to beleve, like de rose dat grew from concrete even harda 2 perceive all dis deceit? makes me wanna leave this world and ask for the receit. its all messed up, wheres the liberty the worlds gone crazy jus set us free were representin the whole African community whats up with tony blair why did he dare to go to iraq and get his army beat up in the dark why did we get involved we shudnt have got involved then it all wouldve all been solved Verse 2 now tell me what type of people are the craziest ill tell you it’s the muthafukin athiasts how can they beleive there aint no GOD, they aint got no proof and when u discuss with them, they jus dissapear like poof any ways nearly everyday there is a murderer, killa or a busta or a thug, jacker or a hustla this crazy world has got me all messed up in the brain its levitating like david blaine driving me insane all these new artists come out takin about the fame but they aint got no game they claim they are a balla but you aint gonna get no talla in this crazy world lyin about shit like dat or ure world will jus shut down in pitch black all of the fakers im gonna be youre worst nightmare ill give you a scare im gonna stand tall and i wont tugg like MUHHAMMAD or MALCOLM i wont budge I am the game I never be losin its Intermental dogg and i aint movin |
Ehm...in your second verse, do you have any actual proof God DOES exist? It was decent; basic vocabulary, yet it flowed well. Keep dropping, and you'll elevate as you go, man...
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Thanks alot homeboy, the God thing is another debate fo another time u get me
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Yeah, man. I'm not atheist or anything, though. Still, we can debate. Check out my piece under this. It's more of a poem, though. :\
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Fo sho I will, is it in Open Mic?
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this was ok some of it was kinda shaky in some parts, ok flow n vocab wit a subjec tlike this u shoulda used some more imagery ya feel me?
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ok drop for such an indepth topic, u should elaborate on it more, keep doin ya thing...1."
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yea fo sho i feel you but this aint my best shit, i jus know i can make summin huge anytime now. thanks homie
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uppin' cmon yall
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