Black Heart vs tranz$cript
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-02-05 at 02:44 PM

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tranz$cript has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 03:07 PM.

yo man is this a dude or a chick,or is it just a bitch wit a dick...
all up on snoop dogg shit,ayo yer wack u shoulda just qiut..
but now u make me go out and ryme ballistic....
why u battlin u aint elevatin com on be realistic...
so yer a newb well im just starten on this flowmatic..
when i hit u wit my verse its gonna be drastic....
man if u a female,u got a better chance gettin fukked...
if u a male u should get that penis untucked....
and u aint popin no gunz mabe if its a supersoaker....
bitch yer like b rabbit nuthin but a choker....
yeye uppin yall

Black Heart has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 03:22 PM.

hurry tha fukk up u need two fukkin dayz to post a 10 liners this better destroy me fer how long u takin

IF YOU DON'T GET THE PUNCHES/PERSONALS/METAHPORS/MULITIZ..please don't vote


You don't want to get your "Mans-Hit" call me college, and your bars are like grades you don't have a strong enough "tranz-script".....
I'll "expand-shit".."ram-clip" have your "famz-lit" run up on your *click* and you'll have your "grams-picked"....
I went to your hood, you act like a king but you got "queens-fame" your so called ghetto I "Seen-Lames"...
Your a "teen-shame" because only money you got is the $ in your "screen-name"

Your a wino, you "Lay-on the-Corner" when around your *chick* my dick "Stay-with a-Boner"....
You want to be like me, but ill take away you heart so you "Pray-for a-Doner" thats why your bars soft like a "Gay-club-Owner"...
You "Debate-While" your bitch, licks my tip, and says i got "Great-Style"...
He can't run the business, he my secetary he "Make-Files" he learned 99% of his punchlines from "8-Mile"....

Im sorry, but your "Heart-I'll-Shadder" smoke a blunt, while i "Rip-Apart-Your-Bladder"....
Even your sig indicates, you wouldn't know go, rhymes with yo, with "Marshall-Mathers"....

You suck "Cocks-In-Herds" i'll come though your Block, and "Pop-you on the-Curb"...
Your "Flocks-are-Herbs" only time he on the mic in public is at karoke trying to rap "Mocking-bird"

Explantions
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He has Eminem is his sig..so
Tranzscript = something you have in college
$ = repsent only money he got in his screen name
8 Mile = Movie them eminem in it, first movie with a wyte guy really rapping.
Marshall Mathers- Ems real name
Mocking Bird = Ems new song

Yo can we get somes votes in this shit!
?????????

Voted For: Black Heart

flow- blackheart, was structured betta, & the best
between the 2
punches- tranz$cript u had a few & they were played,
but blackheart had more & his hit harder
personals- blackheart, had alot more, & were betta;
$cript were pretty lame no hating
multies- obviously, black's rhyme scheme will guarantee
him a win almost always; $cript look at his
verse very close & u'll c
vocab- script urs was lacking, but black's was up 2 par
script ur rhymes need sum elevation
originality- overall both verses were pretty good, but
script lines were played out u need 2 work
on this

V/ BlackHeart also make sure 2 return the favor on
my poem

Voted For: Black Heart

lol yo u really tooks up my whole computer with ya verse fam...damm nigga how can u spit like dat on a beat...u came with some cleva shit and some personals but i dont think alot of ppl gon be able da follow ya bars fam so change ya structure then u'll be good...multis r good but u dont need dem every line

tranzscript...u look like u didnt even try fam u just gave up like da 3rd line but ya verse was very basic u tried da have a personal but it didn't work.....so ya lose

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Voted For: Black Heart

HEART HAD WAY BETTA PUNCHES...TRANZ HAD SUM HOT SHIT TO BEGIN WIT BUT HE LIKE DIED OUT LATE....

Voted For: Black Heart

Aii im Not Gonna describe every BAr Becuase Blac Hearts Structure was really Off BUt His Punchez and Multis Were on Target And I Think That He would take this battle hands down eyes closed ............Transcript I Think You should Lay Low and get somebody To help you Elevate becuae you have that great potentail but you dont really have that talent rii bout now.....You Will Be at The Level Someday .....try To Atleats Put Some kinda punchez together even if it be wack or played its betta than not havin a single punch in there no where ............SO ,.................Work On That And youll be great one day

My Vote

Black Heart


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Voted For: Black Heart

yo black heart got this easily..although he had bad structure his punches knocked him out easily.....his personals was pretty nice too...your shit was mad stretched but still.....your flow was ok....multis was der.....overall 6/10

tranz: that was wack fam....sorry.....your punches was horrible and didnt even land..u wasnt even dissin him..ur structure was aiight..but thats about it....so overall i give u a 4/10

vote: black