Introducin Myself!!!
 

i click my rhyme book open and i turn to the centre page/its where my lyrics and my mind combine to help put words together in a contageous way/my spit causes inflammation to the untouchable parts of the brain/that way my verses are susceptible in church i virtually clasp your hands to pray/so put yo hands together cause this is my first day on the case/im a lyrical saviour im only acceptin gods praise/so any haters or fakers who want to challenge me the star line up of the LA Lakers your just comedy chasers/so keep runnin like biggie and pac im a mixture of the greatest/so put your flicks in the suggestion box and i'll pick out the most tastless!

ehhhh it was alright, i woulda enjoyed reading it more is you pressed eneter after you finished a line but whatever, you stretched a few lines, really far, i liek the last line of the entire thing though, it was pretty decent, overall it was pretty decent, elevate.. gian some respect. nah mean?

werd to enter at the end of a line.
try selecting the whole peice then centreing it.

seen as it is a text peice,presentation helps,alot.

rhymes are ok..flow is a bit off seen as the structures messed..(easily fixed with how i told you before)

content is ok..
keep dropping.
return the feed link in sig.