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Mentor 02-27-05 06:12 PM

completely retardeder
 
hook:
oh no here i go again
fucking chickens in a pen
runnin around plucking, fucking, and clucking
here let me tell ya sumthin' (2x)

verse:
lately i've been having dreams of an alien
takin' me in to watch another homosapien rapin' a young Ukranian
listning to songs on repeat while i jack off with my own two feet
dick getting as hard as concrete while this song is still incomplete
this just ain't rite like me thinking to retire
a crazy transvestite dressing up like Mrs. Doubtfire
peircing myself with a piece of barb wire
fucking a fat ass girl that makes me wanna hurl
while i sit there and just watch my dick swirl
then curve in and curl
crazy lunatics like me just don't belong in this world
i have ta drop links for these frickin' chinks
just because the administrator,
the open mic creator said that i have ta
fuckin' the fatty screaming "Who's your Daddy"
at the same time eating a crabby patty

hook:
oh no here i go again
fucking chickens in a pen
runnin around plucking, fucking, and clucking
okay okay i'll stop humping (2x)

Hoodz Prophet 02-27-05 07:48 PM

yo this iz so fuckin stupid.....stretched lines fucked up forced lines....work on this shit yo no hate or nuthin but yoo this wuz pretty bad

Mentor 02-27-05 07:49 PM

yo some people will find this funny some will find it stupid as hell but if not hatin then why u even bother to leave feed like that think bout it

Mentor 02-27-05 09:09 PM

uppin on this shit.........

Mentor 02-28-05 12:12 AM

c'mon uppin.....

convicted 02-28-05 08:21 PM

yo dawg can tell ya got emotion is most of ya rhymes
tha rhymes that throw me off is a fake ass wannabe a rapper talks bout
guns hustlen an shit an then i take a look at his spec
shit man this dude aint old enought ta drink ya no
anyway your piece was tight feed back on mine gonna drop one
in 30min structure was a little off but shit cant be perfect or it wouldnt be worth it CB83

Mentor 03-01-05 12:25 AM

yo i'm uppin feedback.....


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