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D Man 02-27-05 06:12 PM

ethiks vs D Man
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No Unexplained Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-02-05 at 06:12 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 02-27-05 06:13 PM

D Man has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 06:13 PM.

D Man 02-27-05 07:15 PM

Since the day you came out u smeled a bit fishy,
That weren't a pussy that was fish 2 face repeatedly,
i dont know u and u dont know me,
i can tell u get slapped around easily,
Comin here dawg i don't think u thought this thru,
Culd blo ya brains & still ave mo knowledge than u,
ethiks i can tell that ur lonely,
all on ur own ur an ethnik minority,
the dawgs on here are sending mad,
coz we usin big words u just cant understand,

System 02-27-05 07:33 PM

ethiks has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 07:33 PM.

ethiks 03-02-05 03:12 PM

D Man:

you'll receive 5 votes, when cali admits nos is dope.
ya funny with a mic, like rock comin with mosely jokes.
dont even have enough posts to vote, some rival.
gave himself 4 days to check, like soc in the KORV final.
everybody sleeps on ya shit, like a coed dorm.
dont show, cause youll get shut down like the ingenius forum.
you brick more boards than the pacers versus nuggets.
im like dre with the keys, id give a damn if ya hate it or love it.
ya lines are trash, like homeless with coma sutra signs.
only way youd W, is if i wrote your verse & you wrote mine.

.Judicial. 03-02-05 03:46 PM

Voted For: ethiks

you won basically cause da man waz wack.......you have vocab constant punches.....easy to read structure waz nice......
d man...u need a lot of work....u need to rhyme ur words betters and match up syllabels better...u structure needs to be worked on you need to work on multis personals punches......this waz good since ur new(i guess) keep it up tho

MaRVJay 03-02-05 03:59 PM

Voted For: ethiks

wun sided battle......i should even have 2 explain my vote 4 dis shit

opener-eth real easy.......d ya shit didn't ryhme

structure-eth shit was real neat..d ya lines got long than short then long lol

punchlines-eth

creativity-eth

personals-nun from both

multis-nun from

finisher-eth

enjoyed-eth....y did u battle dis nigga fam?? d step ya shit up man take a look around rv and see how ppl r battlin cuzz u'll neva win rappin like u did here


RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG

Red Stroke 03-03-05 12:39 AM

This was feedback posted for D Man
 
Polls............................................. ...................

ethiks 03-03-05 02:16 AM

uppin..........

ethiks 03-03-05 03:38 PM

uppin..........

Mad Dog 03-03-05 06:45 PM

This was feedback posted for D Man
 
Jus checkin won't vote coz i personally know D Man

H-N-I-C 03-03-05 07:07 PM

Voted For: ethiks

Damn, no contest...ethiks took this one hands down
reativity was there, punches hit harder and D Man...ya shit was kinda whack

(No Hate)

ethiks 03-04-05 06:24 PM

uppin..........

Linguistics 03-04-05 06:57 PM

Voted For: ethiks

ok this si simple........

ethicks u had coo structer ok flow.....rhyme scheme was coo too....u punches were dull and boring nothing great but u didnt really nead a lot against D man......

D man your verse was ok....terrible structer...no real punches......well none that were any good n e wayz...u need to elevate alot.....

v/ethicks

ethiks 03-05-05 01:04 PM

uppin..........


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