Are You Hip-Hop?
 

Link : http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1989968

Just keying this up so check it out..

What's the definition of hip-hop ? The people who write it
Mixing the lyrics with the beats, getting ear drums excited
It's a way of life, not a hobby or something you do
Hip-Hop is love, and it should mean something to you
Something youre born to do, not a thing that you learn
It's like driving with no brakes, and youre nearing the turn
So Hip-Hop is me, now you see, I am the definition or rap
Dont fear it, You hear it, there's no messing with that

So if youre Hip-Hop, you should know it and feel it
Throw ya mic in the air, and show rap is the realest
No more sitting back, letting other music in
It's time to stand up, and let Hip-Hop begin

I've been rappin for years, flipping, just strapped in a chair
Writing my songs, knowing it's wrong, but i capped in my fear
No reason to hide from it, Hip-Hop is the essence of life
Songs about love and hate and the pressence of strife
We speak the real shit, all the truth behind the lies
But rap get's outlawed, then another person dies
That's what they want, dont give them the chance to abuse it
Cuz if anything bad happens, they always blame the music

So if youre Hip-Hop, you should know it and feel it
Throw ya mic in the air, and show rap is the realest
No more sitting back, Letting other music in
It's time to stand up, and let Hip-Hop begin


**Just a 20 min key, feedback please**

not to bad...flow is a bit off..but your views on hip hop seem straight....this drop has some real shit to it...
good drop...just work on a bit of structure.

I've been rappin for years, flipping, just strapped in a chair
Writing my songs, knowing it's wrong, but i capped in my fear
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this line im perssonaly not feeling..I unno I might of took a wrong view on what your saying..blah..
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it'z str8 not structured 2 good but overall it was 8.0/10 u got a good concept 4 ur views evathang else was on point do da damn thang