thanks to everybody that replied to my last one
 

I tried some new recording techniques, let me kno how it sounds, its the top song @
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/determindmusic.htm

ignore the beat i did it, but I was working on lyrics

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1989432

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1989480

If anybody has any tracks they want me to listen to I will. I tried to hit somebodies earlier but soundclick was down. I make beats too, if anybody needs any. Let me know about this song, peace

good lookin out on the comments, pm me about beats im a big beat guy and you kno i liked that one track so get at me

link wont work for me damn

now it does:
Beat:pretty good,kinda like it
Flow:i love it
lyrics:nice nice
Quality:very good

i seriously like this song,imma download it cuz its dope

I'm glad you liked it, I hate the beat, mayb cause I heard it so much, but to me it sounds like it was made on a playstation or some shit

weerd this was pretty nice track beat was ok you flowed good overall i enjoyed it nice track ill edit wif more later gotta shower soon....

presence is real nice..flow is on point 2,and idk..i like the beat...a few nice metas..i used that smack down line a few tracks ago...lola few nice multis,if i'd tell you to work on anything it would proly b vocab or maaby get a bit deeper...but yea,it's tight,ur voice kinda remind me of bone wen the 1st dropped


n i'd ride on ona ur beats if u want

1ne

Just holler at me, I'm all about the beats

aight the beat i wasn't feeling to much sounds all over the place to me...not feeling the flow to much you go off beat a lot...delivery was ok...but you dont sound to confident on the mic...the chorus is kinda loud ...lyrics were aight...you were originally a text head weren't you and you just went audio right? if so it sound like you tryna rap the same way you did text and usually that transition causes cats to try and fit to many words in a line so they have to speed up and slow down the flow all over the track to fit in all their words. anyway holla at me if you want a few pointers fam ...elevation is coming.
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return the feedback
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179666

thanks to everybody feedback has been helpful as a motherfucker TMKA, yeh hit me up with as much shit as you can, i will check your shit out now

see i like beats like this, your flow was off a little bit, but not too bad, just polish up your delivery, but overall, your lyrics were dope, and you definiately have the potential, so keep dropping man.1

listenin...
beat is not bad, but like you said to ignore it a little
voice is on point, works ya style
flow and delivery is pretty much on point, feelin the flow alot more
lyrics are on point also,
hook sounds kinda too loud haha, but its all good
overall a nice track man!

nice beat..dude above was right u kinda started off rocky but u pulled thru ..it wasnt too off in the beginning just know it coulda been better..the chorus is solid..nice shit ...feelin the feel to this song.....you gotta nice rhyme scheme.

good lookin to everybody that posted, I am goin to post another song here shortly, peace