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Link 1: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1992871

Link 2: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1992903

Uppin come on peoples don't sleep

ok...the feed for this song is under ur other tread for your collabo...cuz i jus checked the top track

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179559

Aight man thanks for that yea it's a new mic only a really cheap one so we still tweaking wit it at the mo but i think i found a mic that would suit me well so hopefully quality will improve but it sounds better not on lo fi lol...thanx anyway

np,and you do show potential,it was KINDA HARD TO Hear u cuza the quality,find a way to fix ur vocals...i usta havta wrap a sock around my mic cuz i spit to loud..lol..improvise or whatever,u got a lil flow so that counts for somethin,thats what this shitss for to help peeps elevate,i'm by no means great myself...only reason i'm still hear is cuz im one fuck of a writer...but my presence needs a lota work witch you'll see if u peep my shit,so don't think i'm puttin u down,jus givin honest feedback

1ne

I think all it is really is i jus need to up my volume on my vocals and remove that echo i use it should sound better but i am rusty @ cool edit lol

niceeee... i liked why? that track was dope lol..... when i get all my audio shit sorted u wanna do a collab... im looking to collab wit some u.k heads...

aight not really feeling the chorus at the beginning...sound monotone...need to work on ya mic presence and delivery...dont sound confident and like you reading right off the paper...emotion kinda lacking sound like you board...lyrics were str8...clarity problem tho...pronunciation...flow needs work feel out at a couple of spots...overall i wasn't feelin this joint to much...keep spittin tho elevation is coming fam






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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179666

uppin...i might re-do this ya know

And again......

listening

beat is gangsta straight up and down

not feelin your chorus...it just sounds a lil poor..you could have emphasised the "SMACK DOWN" wid like an over-dub or amplifying it...rather than trying to shout it at the end of your line which just sounds rushed

your lyrics=decent, nuttin wrong, flow is good falls off in places and its just too laid back and casual for this type pf track..shit need some emotion some anger n shit bre, u get me?..your flow was on beat but it didnt fit this type of track..

your quality is better than mine but that is still a bit unclear....

overall-kinda disappointed as one of the UK Mc's on the site ppl always sayin dat the second best UK MC is Mad Dogg, but off this joint bre, i didnt see what all the hype round u was about, u get me? jus tryin 2 be real...-7/10

no h8 :thumbup:

Yea i do agree off day coulda improved on places...uppin again and yo...what about my mates verse? (2nd) he did spit on this too ya know peoples lol

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like dis beat a lil
quality was bad....
flow was less than average
lyrics nothing...
seemed like u very hesitance wif not much presence

4/10

post the link mothafucka...lazy ass talkin bout shit in ur sig...hate dat shit

neway...that lil intro singin shit is wack...sounds ASS-like = bootay

eeeeeeeeeew

i think ur flow is fucked up...u can't ride the beat this well...ur literally on the down beat...ride the off beat nigga...cuz u rap like most white people clap...OFF BEAT

was not feelin this and I know u can come betta


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