Die Slow
 

Im goin to peep this before i crash out for the nite............................you need to flow it out more, it sounds not like your readin it,but like you didnt put any emotion into it. the sample was aight and the beat was there, but the sample was longer then your verse. You need some practice, but practice will make you flow a lot better, you probably had this written so when you did it, you just did it without feeling the beat. imagine freestyling to a beat. when you freestyle you just roll, dont care what you say next, you just flow, you need to do that...............I listened to it again............and I think the same thing. I give you a C, but thats average and you can get better some of the other guys might be able to point out what im trying to say in a better way, peace

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weerd apreciate you takin tha time like i said just quickie but you get tha point...:) thanks for tha feed..=1=

Listening: Beat good...flow is aight...rhyming good quality a knock back but i bet it sounds much better when on either hi-fi or on ya media player so don't worry bout that...but not bad

apreciate it MD..........

I agree with the emotion piece. This could be like a laid back style, but still needs some mixup and such. Lyrics are aight - lovin the beat - where'd you get that? It's mad diff. Second time around... I'm felin ya flow more. You got a different style, and I can appreciate that. Polish that flow even with the style you runnin and you gonna elevate man. Good looks. 1

weerd apreciate it dawg.........

im tired of people sayaing that they did it in 10 minutes
dope beat,very nice
quality could be fix
flow is iight,not bad
very cool like track,the beats make it all
good drop :thumbup:

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