Timmy Corleone vs Durban
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20- Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting TOPICAL-WARM WINTER CREW BATTLE: TJ VS TS G-LUCK! :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 03-04-05 at 04:10 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Durban has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-02-05 12:30 AM.
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Timmy Corleone has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-02-05 04:05 AM.
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expression's being interprited by fullfilling cenarios guys waiting for time to pass...just to watch how far it goes.. is this the future that we have been anticipating for so long? how come this time a the year..allways seems to go so wrong? dim flickering candles resemble the hours windy mind thinking....almost winking at you to open your heart and find your soul is still asking...for a realese before july but why do you cry?...do you deny the lie? as you sit back..alone on your couch..infront of the fire. you try to think...should I end it..wrap my neck in wire.. being so lonley in this time of joy. is'nt what you wanted..when will love deploy? will someone ever reach out...show you there hand or will the devils curses...forever command ............. As a ray of light peaks thru the curtain you stand up...is this the end to my hurting? you look up at the roof...hoping that god has delivered is this a warm winter? trys to step and you shivered Swift walk to the window...hoping to see you open the door...family full of glee you cant belive your eyes...wiping the tears this is the end of my curse...the end of cold winter years? |
Final Thoughts Of a Cheater The Story Of Toney Blair A second of darkness lies within each blinking eye with the vision's in ties with the future's living disguise Outline this dripping dotted line, Her silhoutte on each arm Out shined by the winds chimes, too intimate to feel harm I’m swimming in cries, as help denies instincts implied While sinking in lies, it's not a world, we just visiting life And I've cheated you out I cry for your happy journey cause I hurdle joy for anger & keep the laughing buried A smileless child, wings tattered and her voice seem's lost Walked and thought for miles, dreams shattered after we fought Tears of joy soak my withered cheeks, still they ache to grin Hear the noise, pages begin to speak while I race the pen Her shadow's behind me, holding the sky above my burining corpse Scars remind me, of the guy in love..... dead with no remorse See the horizon in flames, each ray dances across the sky's canvas Screams silenced in blame, seek change after thughts managed Behind my worn steps my halo is drug through the dirt Is the weather warm yet? Head aches and my jaw still hurts After I've fallen off and my tempers flame is blown out I'll still walk lost, beneath Decembers snow, above the clouds The Suicidal Letter Was Found In A Small Vault The Only Things Left From The Fire That Killed Toney And Destroyed His Home |
This was feedback posted for Timmy Corleone
Lmfao.
Tim smoked dis foo. UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH |
This was feedback posted for Durban
Yo Uppin This Shit.....................................
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