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....Gone.... 03-01-05 04:10 PM

Timmy Corleone vs Durban
 
Battle Rules:

20- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

TOPICAL-WARM WINTER


CREW BATTLE: TJ VS TS


G-LUCK! :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 03-04-05 at 04:10 PM

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System 03-02-05 12:30 AM

Durban has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-02-05 12:30 AM.

System 03-02-05 04:05 AM

Timmy Corleone has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-02-05 04:05 AM.

Durban 03-03-05 10:56 PM

expression's being interprited by fullfilling cenarios
guys waiting for time to pass...just to watch how far it goes..
is this the future that we have been anticipating for so long?
how come this time a the year..allways seems to go so wrong?
dim flickering candles resemble the hours windy mind
thinking....almost winking at you to open your heart and find
your soul is still asking...for a realese before july
but why do you cry?...do you deny the lie?
as you sit back..alone on your couch..infront of the fire.
you try to think...should I end it..wrap my neck in wire..
being so lonley in this time of joy.
is'nt what you wanted..when will love deploy?
will someone ever reach out...show you there hand
or will the devils curses...forever command
.............
As a ray of light peaks thru the curtain
you stand up...is this the end to my hurting?
you look up at the roof...hoping that god has delivered
is this a warm winter? trys to step and you shivered
Swift walk to the window...hoping to see
you open the door...family full of glee
you cant belive your eyes...wiping the tears
this is the end of my curse...the end of cold winter years?

Timmy Corleone 03-04-05 01:29 PM



Final Thoughts Of a Cheater
The Story Of Toney Blair

A second of darkness lies within each blinking eye
with the vision's in ties with the future's living disguise
Outline this dripping dotted line, Her silhoutte on each arm
Out shined by the winds chimes, too intimate to feel harm
I’m swimming in cries, as help denies instincts implied
While sinking in lies, it's not a world, we just visiting life
And I've cheated you out I cry for your happy journey
cause I hurdle joy for anger & keep the laughing buried
A smileless child, wings tattered and her voice seem's lost
Walked and thought for miles, dreams shattered after we fought
Tears of joy soak my withered cheeks, still they ache to grin
Hear the noise, pages begin to speak while I race the pen
Her shadow's behind me, holding the sky above my burining corpse
Scars remind me, of the guy in love..... dead with no remorse
See the horizon in flames, each ray dances across the sky's canvas
Screams silenced in blame, seek change after thughts managed
Behind my worn steps my halo is drug through the dirt
Is the weather warm yet? Head aches and my jaw still hurts
After I've fallen off and my tempers flame is blown out
I'll still walk lost, beneath Decembers snow, above the clouds

The Suicidal Letter Was Found In A Small Vault
The Only Things Left From The Fire That Killed Toney
And Destroyed His Home



Magic5 03-04-05 02:13 PM

This was feedback posted for Timmy Corleone
 
Lmfao.

Tim smoked dis foo.

UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

....Gone.... 03-04-05 06:09 PM

This was feedback posted for Durban
 
Yo Uppin This Shit.....................................


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