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Bangalore 03-01-05 04:52 PM

Still bored free write i guess
 
and with... a song in my hand.
i wrote for you "here"..
trying to be as calm as i can.
we stand for a while.
making sure to give subtle smiles.
as we walk down ..down that road .
i take the chance as i take hold of your hand.
when i . place it upon my chest i ask your what you feel .
you say " i don't know yet."
later on as your eyes start to close.
we say our good nights and forget our goodbyes.
now we . all we have to do is wait .
wait for those rays to shine on the floor.




i'll write more later ... i blocked lol

fluidmoon 03-01-05 05:16 PM

man, you keep writing great pieces..yea, like you said in my poem thread, if you really are in the mood to just let it come out, great poems can happen in 5 minutes..looks like your on a roll...lol, keep it up.1

Macca 03-01-05 06:47 PM

You should have all your poems the same but I think your other poems were better. This looked like it was keyed up. Nice though. Keep em coming.


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