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AssAsInS-eVolve! vs static
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8 - 12 UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-05-05 at 11:48 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
AssAsInS-eVolve! has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 11:50 AM.
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This chumped wanted to battle me man....hoo-ray
man i knew he wack thats why i gave him two days Im aiming for you only so you can call it a solo-shot not that i hate ya..its thats ya more fake than robo-cop Ill drop tsunami's on this bitch coz he's plauged wit lies This battle is over so you may as well WAVE good-bye you shouldnt u've entered da forum..u shouldve layed of coz jumping head first in a fire only way youll stay hot Some should put n end to him n swipe his mic Coz all of his raps are worthless just like his life! |
static has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 03:31 PM.
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Jus like yo name, you're wack, so don't you jump-it
And you blow more than a little kid equipped wit a trumpet Yo rhymes, we'll never bump-it, cuz in rap, you're jus a rookie I'm allergic to cats, that means you, you fuckin' pussy If this battles a game, wit points, I'd win this shit by thirty Bruise yo body black and blue, like a Duke road game jersey Yea, it took me 3 days for me to come and drop my verse I did so you could have false hope, and make the pain worse |
Voted For: static
assasin would have got my vote it was goin good and like da last 4 lines did not rhyme at all i mean wtf the last bar rhymed but u could have been more complex with that....static gets my vote for consistency of punches........1 return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180185 |
dude swipe his mic n like his life rhymes so wtf u tlking bout. so does stayhot n layed off buti guess their audio rhymes more than txt. but thx for voting man
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Voted For: static
static.. nice creative punches.. eh on the personals but over all i liked urs more it was witty at points. you had a much better opener and closer.. nice vocab to .. Jus like yo name, you're wack, so don't you jump-it And you blow more than a little kid equipped wit a trumpet Yo rhymes, we'll never bump-it, cuz in rap, you're jus a rookie I'm allergic to cats, that means you, you fuckin' pussy eh alright lil stretched but i like it 4/10 If this battles a game, wit points, I'd win this shit by thirty Bruise yo body black and blue, like a Duke road game jersey decent 5/10 Yea, it took me 3 days for me to come and drop my verse I did so you could have false hope, and make the pain worse eh coulda been worded better but nice 3/10 12/30 This chumped wanted to battle me man....hoo-ray man i knew he wack thats why i gave him two days Im aiming for you only so you can call it a solo-shot not that i hate ya..its thats ya more fake than robo-cop Ill drop tsunami's on this bitch coz he's plauged wit lies This battle is over so you may as well WAVE good-bye you shouldnt u've entered da forum..u shouldve layed of coz jumping head first in a fire only way youll stay hot Some should put n end to him n swipe his mic Coz all of his raps are worthless just like his life! ok i won't evaluate this one.. you need to work on your vocab his was short but packed more punch.work on that and learn metaphors better nice drop on both sides... vote//Static rtf links in the sig honest votes only |
Voted For: static
Vocab: eh, i thought this category was slightly tilted towards static, but not by much... plus the hoo-ray rhyme to start was kinda weak and seemed way too forced Punches: definitely static in this category... only decent punch from evolve was that wave line, and it was only half-decent, all other punches were wack and played, like the stay hot by fire line... VERY played, static wins this category Wordplay: this also goes to static pretty handily, was diggin the way you worded that cat line, even though it was kinda played... evolve dog you're creating opportunities to play on words, but i think you're trying too hard with the punch that you're overlooking that part... elevate that and you'll be good overall: i liked static's flow and structure, and the punches just came off better and harder... i gotta give static my vote here |
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Voted For: static
V/static....he gets my vote he came out wit original punchs an some good personals..wit good structure...assasin...u had a good verse but u lacked wit consistent diss's u had some good lines but didnt hit as hard as static...no hate good battle RETURN THE FAVOR.... Opener=s closer=s structure=tie punchs=s personals=s vocab=s overall=Static |
Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!
Assasin: This chumped wanted to battle me man....hoo-ray man i knew he wack thats why i gave him two days wack punch Im aiming for you only so you can call it a solo-shot not that i hate ya..its thats ya more fake than robo-cop wack meta but better Ill drop tsunami's on this bitch coz he's plauged wit lies This battle is over so you may as well WAVE good-bye don't steal concepts again you shouldnt u've entered da forum..u shouldve layed of coz jumping head first in a fire only way youll stay hot plizayed... Some should put n end to him n swipe his mic Coz all of his raps are worthless just like his life! NO! Ya the ratings are hard, but I was like this as a noob also, just look at rv's greats and try to elevate, no good punches Static: Jus like yo name, you're wack, so don't you jump-it And you blow more than a little kid equipped wit a trumpet blah, ok concept Yo rhymes, we'll never bump-it, cuz in rap, you're jus a rookie I'm allergic to cats, that means you, you fuckin' pussy coulda been worded better, bo decent If this battles a game, wit points, I'd win this shit by thirty Bruise yo body black and blue, like a Duke road game jersey plizayed Yea, it took me 3 days for me to come and drop my verse I did so you could have false hope, and make the pain worse ok ya, you didn't destroy him, but this was pretty one sided, you had some ok lines, the pussy line was ok, shoulda worded it better though, good battle though both. v/static |
Voted For: static
puches static multies evole enjoy static orgnal static winner static your verse was tight evole but static got this |
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