Fake Rappers!
 

Link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1996855

This piece is for all you fake rappers on this site.. you know who u are...


Check it....


This one here is for all of you biters and queer actors
My rhyme's is sick.. try me bitch.. call this fear factor
Just step up to this and i'll smack ya face backwards
Wait a minute im almost finished with you fake rappers


Im sick of this! Kids is thick and quick to diss, but picture this
You fake emcee's couldnt be ill with syphillis and sticky piss
Played out like nintendo, thru my window, im pitching bricks
Fucking bitches, I speak softly but carry the biggest stick
You'll be rigged stiff with rigamortis when i split the corpses
The sickest forces got enough shine to eclipse your offense
Now takin donations for ya abortion, got grids for torture
So you best huddle, chests'll bubble, when i spit the scorcher
Next to the pro, emcee's seem makeshift and tasteless
Rhymes are basic, so erase it, and enjoy ya verbal facelift


This one here is for all of you biters and queer actors
My rhyme's is sick.. try me bitch.. call this fear factor
Just step up to this and i'll smack ya face backwards
Wait a minute im almost finished with you fake rappers


I got enough pull to make space shift, when i disgrace kids
Im abrassive, ya futures what you make it, so embrace it
And prepare for death, dared to test, now ya in a hairy mess
Swear youre fresh, but scared to death, when i tear ya flesh
I figured you out, so i single you out, and spare the rest
Shear ya chest, So grab your blanket and fear my text
I slice cats, Plus if you think youre nice, im twice that
And now that im on a roll, im never giving the dice back


25 min Keystyle.. feedback appreciated................

...shit was kinda funny to me...it actually made me smile
but good piece tho...flow was good, decent topic, and the
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structure was aight here, but overall decent piece, though
7/10

thx for feedback uppin for more......

Yp the flow was cool, topic was kinda hot i liked it and it had nice structure and was a pretty easy read... overall good song 8/10

it was nice, multiples were sick...

yeah, it was decent... sick multies, im not gonna lie... but you didn't do any personal lines, and that woulda appealed to me more... but its all good, look for one back son

well i had no one to do personals against, this was just for everyone who's fake lol thx for feedback tho

haha oh shit, i thought you were directing it towards us cause the link, you should said it was feedbck.. lol

lol nah just the OM i left feedback on

yo nice peice...good keystyle and I enjoyed it...nothin special here though...just another keystyle...chorus was aiight...and flow was good..keep it up...

btw return the favour on my battle:

me vs. bradley_thomas...

much appreciated...