feeling on you....
 

feelings for you strong so un percieved
youre the light on my flame hidden so deep
wivout u im weak huney, my heart feels so lonley
come and swim in my sea and see what i see
youre what i breathe
what im here for, what i wake for each day
promise me u'll stay and neva betray
ur ways are engraved, on my heart a tattoo
physically and mentally ill show love for you
hold me in your arms, emotionlly subdued
never confused never cold nor used
wivout you im helpless almost incomplete
as if i was a jigsaw u'd be my last piece
words cant express what you mean to me
and its not easy to show you
just as u know aswell as i do, i live for you boo
nothing can amount to, nothing compares to you
and when we make love together i always reminise
think of all the times that we shared it was bliss
i remember every kiss and how everytime we amiss
arguements and feuds we carry on its a trip


for my girlx

sorry guys been away for a bit but im back! this ones unfinished would just like to hear comments and suggestions crits welcome

nuff love

Mad props fo` this ...
i cant start to explain how much i loved this,
Truely an amazin poem,
sweet ...

Keep droppin da illness!

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thanks uppin keep the comments flowin

YO DIS SHYT WAS LOVELY. I LIKE DA WAY IT FLOWED DA HOLE 9. KEEP DROPPEN EM. 1LUV

thx up

dam sleepers