The Intro
 

this a little rapping I did over a beat I plan on making the intro for my mixtape the Lyrical Art Creation, just as soon as I redo all this shit in the studio yeah but just hear it and tell me what yall think, give me all things yall can think of check it out at www.soundclick.com/lethalgk

I replied to http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179843
and http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179720

I'm not feeling the beat, your delivery sounds like eminems first cd infinite before he was signed, sounds real similar to that. It's good at points. I just don't really like the beat. The flow is on point for real, at times i could tell it was a rough draft, but you ripped it. If you went back over it would probably help out a lot. I just don't like the beat, but mayb thats just me. B-

check me out if you get the chance
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179850

Flow is mad clean. Beat is original and grimey fasho. who made this beat? I'm feelin this track fa real. Lyrics came straight nice too. Man you got some nice breath control thats for real. You like the reverse Big Pun lol. Yeah - this track came off nice, one of the better tracks I heard in a minute on here. Good looks. Holla at me for colab yo. 1

word thanks for the feedback

damn I thought there would of been more replies to this by now, drop yalls link so I can return the favor or whatever uppinnn

yooo thats true lol good track im feeling this,i liked infinite so i like this :thumbup:nice beat nice flow,you rap fast,pretty cool,keep going,
return the favor:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...394#post1998394

up up uppppppinnn

hope u dont take this as a diss. cause it really aint. but i can see u dancin and kickin on this track like kriss kross used to do. the shit is hot though. nice beat to let loose on. and thats exactly what u did. flow is on point, as well as the lyrics. from what i hear, ya shit sound like it gone be hot when it drop. just make sure u let me cop one. we aint that far apart. stay up cuz.

ahhhhhh man you the 5th person to tell me I sound like kriss kross, 5 for kriss kross and 3 for pun damn lol

upppppppppppppppppppp

yo wtf be honest and give me feed on the link i left

for a shorty u got nice shit..lol betta than alot of niggas on here. keep up the good work cuz as soon as you get up there man you gonna be Ill as hell...you young too so that just makes it even better ...

my bad I didnt notice you dropped a link im at school right now but imma drop on it when I get back

this sounds like it has an old school kinda stylz
good flow for spitting as fast as u did, enygma stylz lol
lyrics were ight from what i can tell
good adlibs and quality wasnt bad, if u did it in a studio like u said it should sound good
that part where there is silience in beat and u spit, i think the silence was too long, or too many words in it, seemed off....

beat was ok

7/10

i liked this ish flow was real nice....gud job yo