tranz$cript vs The Profit
 

:thefinger :thefinger :gfy: Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-03-05 at 02:29 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

tranz$cript has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 02:00 PM.

The Profit has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 02:02 PM.

Ill murk u
have yo body floatin up stream
Im 99 percent accuarte when using the beam
im a genis at spittin these ryhmes
i got a anger management proble
that fuck9in wit my mind
i care if u die
cause im ready to kill u
wit to glocks in my hand
an i ready to find ya
i got a bitch on my hip
an she ready to seek ya
an when she speak
she spittin this either
my bitch is always on her period
because she always bleedin
leave leeks in yo body
that the doctor cant heal

vote for me and the favor will be returned so hit ya boy up

ayo is this cat gonna come quik,or choke like a chump....
i got tha killa rolled up,bout to leave yer face lumped...
ass get jumped,u be in tha dark like WHAT...
hol yer whole crew up,bitch u just actin tough....
im tryin to elevate,and he still cant come correct...
man i need a rap guru,but yer still bout to be chin-checked

u dont say vote fer me u fukkin chump besides that verse was wack

Voted For: The Profit

My vote is for the profit
he killed what ever his name is he merked him

didnt explain yer vote u moron get tha fukk outta this thread im gettin that vote dqed bitch prolyy tha profit other name
fukkin ppunk

look bitch boy he killed u from all different from the begin to the end he had beter puches and he just took over it wit his words u dick in the booty little bitch

This was feedback posted for The Profit
 

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man i already askied if i could be in hense tha line4s in that ryme rap guru

youre already in killer...calm down...

This was feedback posted for The Profit
 

Voted For: tranz$cript

okay, i had to check the rules again cause i thought this was a whack battle...no offense

tranzscript....need to work on your punches man, you have the right idea, but alot of your lines were just fillers....and the "like WHAT" line, doesnt work well....you had good flow and structure, and you kept consistent, and thats why your getting my vote, but you gotta elevate man...

the profit.....hands down, you didnt do anything real well here....dont type out your verse like that, its very confusing and you wanna make it easy on the voters so you might actually get votes, cause you have no structure at all, and flow was bad......and your punches and personals....dont try insulting him saying your "girl is always on her period" thats not a punch...that makes me wanna laugh at you, you pretty much just talked about yourself this whole battle and again, thats not what you wanna do.....word, you both need ta elevate alot...keep up though

v/tranzskriptz....for attempting punches, better flow and structure