Mad Dog vs Cincanatus
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dick Riding
No Unexplained Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 450

Check in by: 03-03-05 at 06:36 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Mad Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 05:50 PM.

Cincanatus has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 05:56 PM.

Voted For: Mad Dog

Good battles from both here.

Mad Dog: opener was real good, had a simplicity about it with a good punch that hit hard. Closer was even a lot better. Nice close, good metaphor in the punch about all-standing stadium, which worked real well. Overall your verse flowed really well the punches were all hitting hard. Structure was good too which made it real easy to read and was entertaining enough for a merking.

Cincanatus: opener was good, nice metaphor but the punch wasnt as hard-hitting. Closer was weak, didnt really hit that hard. It was a good bar and good to close but needed to have more of an edge. Overall ya flow was ok, but heavy going with some really good punches and metapphors, your structure was good too but the verse wasnt as entertaining or annoying. Nice verse but i didnt feel it as much.

Sorry Cincanatus bro

This was feedback posted for Mad Dog
 

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This was feedback posted for Cincanatus
 

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Voted For: Mad Dog

Cin, wasnt feeling your Opener, First line was alright, but the punch was forced an didnt hit at all

The middle of ya verse, was all usless rhyming that really had no effect, you rarely had a nice personal, an the punches were all played stuff, no hate, but you gotta come much stronger against a person like Mad Dog
an sorry, but that E Looch shit is pointless too, it didnt hit or nothin'...stepo it up against established emcees

Mad Dog:
I like that Red from envy or all the Questions, shit was nice, it really made the opening 3 lines connect, nice way ta bring your opener into the battle, blah, the suggestion line an half a chance line wasnt your strongest, but the line concerning all his aliases an not knowing his face was nice, decent stuff...
the build up line wasnt all that nice Dog, but the closer killed it, real witty stuff

Mad dog got this, his verse was much more creative, an straight too the point, Cinns verse seemed like it was all fillers an no real hard hittin personals or punches, no hate y'all...RTF Too, peace out

DQ'ed.. possible hate vote

Voted For: Mad Dog

good battle didn't really see no spectacular lines...but

mad dog

Ya exert ya stress in the wrong direction,
This' so little a challenge...his name i won't mention,
Whats the matter? have i ruined ya complection?
U lookin red wit envy or is it from all these questions?,
1 suggestion...take ya 50% record out my face,
U got a 1/2 ass chance so ya lyrics i wouldn't waste,
Slap you back in place bitch you so disgraced,
You changed ya name so much, you don't even know ya face!,
Don't mean to offend ya but this will hurt ya cranium,
You can't get a crowd on they feet in an all standin stadium
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umm u had a real solid verse...i se u didn't really go 4 da real creative punchlines or personals u were just tryin da make him feel low with lines like "this so little challenge..his name i wont mention" lol i like dat...ya wordplay was good it seem like u were holdin back a lil tho but overall i liked ya verse

cincanatus...

"Mad Bitch" Coz I Threw Him Off His Bike, And Ripped "Off His Chain"
Now He Aint Going No Where, Like School Kids In A Deans Office Mayn

Middle
You Still In The Stage Imagining You'll Beat Me Like Disney Shows.....
He's Mad Coz, Being A Mod, Doesn't Mean He Can Get Some Votes....
I'm No "Vet" But I Know Dogs Can't Rap And That's An Established Fact
Your Internet Connection Is For Girls, That's The Only Way He Interacts
Kid's From England But We Can't Understand Him, Like He Speaks Spanish
You Was Done My Friend Way Before You Dared To Accept My Challenge

Closer
Will The Rest Of Rap Verse Ever Know, You Pm For Votes? Or Is It Just A Mystery?
Man Fucka Waisting A Good Closer On An Dog, Like E Looch You Anceint History
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umm i didn't like ya opener ya shit was real basic...u had a couple nice personals ya punches were okay but u were forcin words 2 ryhme n i hate dat shit..some lines were stretched but i keep up with ya flow overall good verse

opener-mad dog
structure-mad dog
punchlines-cincanatus
wordplay-mad dog
creativity-a tie
flow-mad dog
multis-mad dog..he had like 1
personals-mad dog..da 8th line bout cin changin his name
finisher-mad dog..i like dat punch
enjoyed-mad dog....his verse was kind of simple but efective cin u could of came a lil harder *pause* forcin words 2 ryhme gotta stop tho fam

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This was feedback posted for Mad Dog
 

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