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Os1ris vs Hexa
Battle Rules:
6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-03-05 at 10:49 PM Must drop verse in 200 minutes after check in. |
Os1ris has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 07:31 PM.
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At least try to make a 5-5 record the playoffs will be here with the 500 percent
He the star player on his team has the most time yea riding on the bench Os1 cant swing most of his punches are like hollow tips bullets full of air Got the boot out of a established crew because it wasnt no room for homos there His verse been in a 12 round fight with Ali because all his bars are stretched Light weight with light weight i can push him around he weighs less than what i rep |
Hexa has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 08:00 PM.
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At least try to make a 5-5 record the playoffs will be here with the 500 percent
He the star player on his team has the most time yea riding on the bench Os1 cant swing most of his punches are like hollow tips bullets full of air Got the boot out of a established crew because it wasnt no room for homos there His verse been in a 12 round fight with Ali because all his bars are stretched Light weight with light weight i can push him around he weighs less than what i rep |
Hexa’s a newby muhfucka… shit talk gets you geeks ate quicker
I set the bar; your just pressin for a loss like weak weightlifters You’re a lie like ya location.. dogg ya spits aint good enuff for da booth* Fuck ya spits, im aimin to knock the knowledge out ya wisdom tooth The only hex around here is your lame ass is present at this board..right This guys lame the proof ….. who welcome themselves to rap sites*… *his location *http://community.rapverse.com/showt...407#post1999407 |
Voted For: Os1ris
Well, Os1ris took this one, ya punches were str8, no real multies or personals by either one of u, but...Hexa u need to elavate No Hate |
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Voted For: Os1ris
ima give it ta os1ris since his shit was atleast decent....hexa ya wack plain N simple...no hate....flow and punches came AIGHt from os1ris....structure was pretty good kinda stretched.... v/os1ris |
Voted For: Os1ris
ight both verses were pretty interesting checking out: flow- or1sis, was structured betta, which made it flow betta punches- by both contestants i had pretty decent wordplay in this battle, but o had more & they hit alot harder then hexa personals- o, had alot more, & were alot betta; no hate but hexa's were pretty lame & didn't form 2 good 2getha multies- o obviously took this category wit the way he set his rhyme scheme; hexa u don't need 2 strecth ur lines & look at o's verse & u'll c vocab- was ok on both parts but nothin' really stands out originality- o has the originality all thru his verse & hexa u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes |
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Voted For: Os1ris
At least try to make a 5-5 record the playoffs will be here with the 500 percent He the star player on his team has the most time yea riding on the bench EHH, NOT A VERY EFFICIENT OPENER Os1 cant swing most of his punches are like hollow tips bullets full of air Got the boot out of a established crew because it wasnt no room for homos there ...PLAYED PUNCH WEAK SETUP, TRY TO BE A LIL MORE AGGRESSIVE WHEN YOU BATTLE SOME ONE, THIS VERSES IS LACKING, BUT YOU STILL NEW SO , YOU HAVE PLENTY OF TIME TO IMPROVE YOUR VOCAB AND PUNCHES Hexa’s a newby muhfucka… shit talk gets you geeks ate quicker I set the bar; your just pressin for a loss like weak weightlifters GOOD PUNCH HEARD B4 BUT NICE TWIST TO IT You’re a lie like ya location.. dogg ya spits aint good enuff for da booth* Fuck ya spits, im aimin to knock the knowledge out ya wisdom tooth HAHA, GOOD WORD PLAY MAN, OVERALL GOOD JOB ON YA VERSE, CREATIVE AND ENTERTAINING, I GOTTA GO WITH OS1RIS ON THIS ONE V/OSIRIS http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=2005794 RETURN FAVOR PLEASE |
Voted For: Hexa
Hexa’s a newby muhfucka… shit talk gets you geeks ate quicker I set the bar; your just pressin for a loss like weak weightlifters decent punch You’re a lie like ya location.. dogg ya spits aint good enuff for da booth* Fuck ya spits, im aimin to knock the knowledge out ya wisdom tooth no The only hex around here is your lame ass is present at this board..right This guys lame the proof ….. who welcome themselves to rap sites*… okay, pretty decent here At least try to make a 5-5 record the playoffs will be here with the 500 percent He the star player on his team has the most time yea riding on the bench good punch hea Os1 cant swing most of his punches are like hollow tips bullets full of air Got the boot out of a established crew because it wasnt no room for homos there nope, flow = 2 long + punch was weak His verse been in a 12 round fight with Ali because all his bars are stretched Light weight with light weight i can push him around he weighs less than what i rep kinda good… Overall Hexa took this one, punches were harder, vocab was good, Both had good structures but Hexa took this one though |
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Voted For: Os1ris
meh..heres how i see it hex >At least try to make a 5-5 record the playoffs will be here with the 500 percent He the star player on his team has the most time yea riding on the bench -little stretched, not really a punch, poor wordplay 2/10 >Os1 cant swing most of his punches are like hollow tips bullets full of air Got the boot out of a established crew because it wasnt no room for homos there -not a bad personal, still wordplay is whack 4/10 >His verse been in a 12 round fight with Ali because all his bars are stretched Light weight with light weight i can push him around he weighs less than what i rep -uhh, no, stretched, poor wordplay, forced, played 2/10 overall: 8/30...no hate or nothing, but you need to elevate alot, it can be forgivin cause its probs your first battle, just spruce up on things in the tutorials, cause you stretch your lines too much and you dont really have the idea of punches yet, so yeah, keep at it os1ris...wasnt that great either >Hexa’s a newby muhfucka… shit talk gets you geeks ate quicker I set the bar; your just pressin for a loss like weak weightlifters -meh, weak, first line was worded poorly....5/10 >You’re a lie like ya location.. dogg ya spits aint good enuff for da booth* Fuck ya spits, im aimin to knock the knowledge out ya wisdom tooth -not a bad punch here...6/10 >The only hex around here is your lame ass is present at this board..right This guys lame the proof ….. who welcome themselves to rap sites*… -not a bad personal, set up was dumb 5/10 overall: 16/30....you got this because you attempted more punches and they hit fairly well, but your wordplay and vocab need to upped, alot, cause it was rough reading it, which also threw off your flow, so keep elevating man....got the right idea down v/os1ris |
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