Only time knows(Im so fly remix)
 

ya!! lets go!!

[Chorus]
only time knows cuz I cant tell
will I survive spittin rhymes or will I fail
This is from the heart so I keep it real
Im boxed up inside so im letting loose
I gotta keep tryin,gotta payin my dues
but if it's not worth the shit then tell me what's the use
(repeat 2X)

[Verse]
yo I feel like sometimes the world keeps turnin
im tryna stay steady cuz my desire keeps burnin
I know I'll make it one day if I stay determined
and im still tryna perfect all these skills am learnin
so am yearnin,just to stay high
I know I gotta get by
I hope people know me after dis cuz words dont die
I cant settle for second best,I dont want no tie
if u tryna criticize me then really why try
cuz if u dont get Adrenaline that's a damn lie

[Chorus]
only time knows cuz I cant tell
will I survive spittin rhymes or will I fail
This is from the heart so I keep it real
Im boxed up inside so im letting loose
I gotta keep tryin,gotta payin my dues
but if it's not worth the shit then tell me what's the use
(repeat 2X)

piggy bank

yo you need ta work on your multi's alot...there hasn't even been one in there and you just kinda kept it simplistic...there was no punchlines at all neither and u really didnt describe anything with any emotion...yo by adding all three of those to your open mics will grab the readers attention all the time so u really need ta practice anyway u can on that and if u ever need help just ask me or anotha emcee...i'd give u bout a 4/10 for that...but trust me i know u could do better if u try harder

nhaaaaeeggh.....whateva....scrap this.....if u want uppin....lol

nhaaaaeeggh.....whateva....scrap this.....if u want uppin....lol
probably my worst peice....lol

yeah son this joint wasnt that hot at all. wasnt really much to judge here on this. ok verse and ya drop wa slikea 5 or so. its kind of basic work on ya flow's and structure. try n put some multies in next time. i know u can do alot better than that. but its all good. ...1...