[rate]~If I Could~[hot]
 

Just something quick on what I think shit should be like...Nothing special






If I could, take back time, I'd take what's mine
The crown of hip-hop, matter-a-fact, I'd take the throne
Change the globe, be known for the greatest rhymes
And change the minds, of those who wanna hate the flow
If I could bring back lives, it would be the soldiers of the past
Like, Tupac Shakur, or Notorious BIG
Get rid of all these troubles, and these boulders on our backs
And make all the world's, boys and girls, glorify this
If I could, change the Earth, I'd change the curse
Why when a mother gives birth, the father walks out and leaves?
Why we judge books by their cover? Have sex without rubbers?
And when we depressed, we don't talk, we just spark up them trees
If I could, change the streets, I would take away the beef
Why everytime we try to show a little love, we fail?
Why is there no money for education, but there's money for wars?
The government's the criminal, so why are they putting us in jail?

damn, dis as pretty good

6.5/10

i was feelin it

hit up ma open mic http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=180172

weerd...thanx man...like I said, nothing too special...I will hit your shit up...Upping for more feed...1

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Upping this shit for Black~Magik...

leave some fuckin feed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^thought u said you was retired...

...from this site

this piece was good fam u really r sumthin' 2 look out 4 & yeah overall was 8.5/10 vocab was on point...structure was there...meta's were good...multis were nice...the only thang u need 2 work on is ur structure but othawise ur good fo sho
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