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Tremendous verse
*****Tremendous~Verse***** "JUST A QUIK SPIT FOR A NO SHOW HOLLA THE FEEDBACK" "CLIK THIS BITCH" left feed on seven thirds fiya diss and triple ns return track |
yea I already told you I was feelin this... the inflection in the beggining, was real creative, displayed a dope amount of vocal range, punches in every bar just about... its a shame this was wasted on a no-show fammoz.... foreal, though keep doin it...1
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not feelin' how ya verse goes high sometimes, sound like yuo goin' through puberty jakk, lol...feelin' this beat tho, madd different...flow's definetly on point, no complaints here cept what I said 1st...
P.S. SevenThird is a delete-happy, power abusing audio MOD... check "Fluid Moon Diss"... |
up and down your all over the place......its an ok beat different but ok....some weak lines, like the karate line...........I don't realy feel a diss to this beat, but i guess you did, more of a fun type song. wow, thats it, way to short. your voice was up and down, I didn't really hear you dissin dude that hard.....maybe i missed it, let me peep it again.........................did you say"i choke like germans" didnt get that...............no i wasn't feeling it, just being honest pimpin, not my tea cup, peace
hit me back fam http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179850 |
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My fella-bostonian....
Lets see...Listen'in.... Lmao...ya flow's sick...like that high pitch shit....shows u got character. not sum hard ass thug. Quality's excellent....ya lyrics are funny as well, I liked it.... I hate the beat, but u sound good on it. 8/10. Drop sum feed on my intro shit....thanks. |
shits tight..just dont like how ya voice cracks up a bit..but that beat is ill son..lol ...SEND IT OVERRRR and i'll drop a nice lil track to it or just a verse or free which ever im in the mood for but that beat is dope son..lyrically you came nice the usually some lines i've heard before but you wrote a bit diff which made'em better..nice verse over all...1ne...
P.s. get at me on aim if you still got that beat... |
Yo nice drop Bro, Lyrics were tight as hell very creative, Feeling the beat also., i can see why he didnt show up. lol..Good Shit keep it comming...
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Note to self: Leave feed on this tomorrow morning. ZZZzzzz....
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we ll see...........................................
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I like the beat. A lot. Lyrics were pretty on point. Theres a point you plug in a sample recorded form TV and I cna't make out what you nor the sample were saying at that ime. It's really too short to give any progressive feedback, but from what I've heard it's pretty solid. Just needs to be longer.
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Listening: Tony brings it again...beats different i like it...flow strong...lyrics lol some good punches...this prolly woulda been a battle winner but i ain't got the other guys verse...and seeing as it was posted here...neither did you -_-...but nice drop Tony keep em comin & RTF in my sig :thumbup:
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i aint hatin on it or nuthin dawg but its really not my style...........not really into the sound of someone squeezin ya balls every other line anyway keep droppin
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HEY ya preference is yours man but all ive seen is hate in ur other posts
show me ya soundclik so i can see how ill u are |
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