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iStaBWoMaN 07-27-02 09:51 PM

Transparent Feelings
 
Cracked Frames, A Visionless Sight
Lifes On Strike Which Path Is Right
Love Forced Seduction & Pain Is Felt
Gods' Swinggin With Depression Belts
What Do I Do, Must I Prove My Heart
Even When You Felt Safe From The Start
Not Wanting To Get Hurt, I Understand
But All I Want To Hear is ''Your My Man''
Blown Off, Placed Next To The Old Toys
Seems I Just Became Another G.I. Joe Boy
Shelfed With The Rest.. A Backup Plan
Not This Time, Heres Were I Take A Stand
Give You Options, Rushed But You Choose
No Longer Am I Being Played..
..............But In The End I Still Loose?

.....Why?

LACK OF LOGIC 07-27-02 09:56 PM

you mimic alot of poetic style text tight nit

Ibro_Palic 07-27-02 10:19 PM

yo i'm workin on somethin and your shid is kinda similar to it hit me up for a colab if you want.

iStaBWoMaN 07-27-02 10:42 PM

If AnYOnE WaNNA CoaLLaB pM . .
Me. .

adapt 07-29-02 12:27 AM

ill give you one response to tell me
if you bit this or if you have an alias.
winkie ;)

adapt 07-29-02 12:29 AM

oh.. regardless this piece was ill.
emotions were dope. if you get
at me on aim i'll link you to a
very fucking ill poetry site. sil,
spanishguru, da soundman, etc.
are all there with me. ad if you'd
like to collab in a poetic form im
down. pz

.eL. 08-02-02 02:12 PM

Adapt i didnt bite it and yes my otha name is Lost In View :)

Anyways drop ya aim and i'll collab

OnSlaught 08-02-02 03:18 PM

This was aight, keep spittin, look forward to more from you

Peace

adapt 08-02-02 03:23 PM

paradoxeddiction..

i said that cuz i saw it on rnr.

pz

.eL. 08-04-02 11:53 AM

aight


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