Gateway v.s DeJureThaRaw
 

peep rules

10 line max
verses due by tomorrow 12 pm board time
no crew voting
dickryding
3-0 is a k.o first to 5 wins
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10 lines or 10 bars?

10 lines/bars

oh aiight i'll post in about 10 min

Man dont take to long writin your verse,it aint nothin but 10 bars

Round 1:

I see you have a Big crew,when I'm threw,they'll be Late-Great-Thugs//Treat yall like Weed and smoke yall,Gateway your just "Gateway"-Drugs//
see,there's no-flow-wetter//You should be a no-show-letter//cuz I'm better than you,you dont know me??well that explains why you Dont-Know-Better//

Your friends be like.."Oh,you ryme-right?"//"well heres a lemon and a bulb, its tha only way you'll eva see tha lime-light"//
....I bet you read that bar and said "Dam, that lines tyte"//your lines look like they shouldnt be together, its not natural, your nothing but a ryme-dyke//

Go ahead review my bars...yes,every line had-a-twist//I heard you were a bad man,well that explains why your really Bad-at-This//

unpolished?an antique style,with a 2 cylinder engine,Dj's left in the dust....dropped first he's an early bird,but his shit isn't eye opening comapred to eye crust.....looking at your shit i would have thought it was molested by a rapist it was just a disgust....always flaking up to mc's couldn't be highly balanced in performance if he washed with purt plus.....couldn't withstand a real challenge....so now he's calling his local radio station giving nothing but shot outs.....never even took wrestling school but im pinning him with a 3 count(ko)more then boy scouts....he ain't even up to par...so when would/wood my confidence start to doubt?I'm blowing Dj out the water,you would sware he's ancetreal background was a scene dipicted out of pearl harbor....sorry son but you couldn't elevate shit if you were a booster seat at your local barbor

GATE WAY TOOK THIS HE WAS HARDER WITH IT
OH BOY SOUNDED EXHAUSTED AND LIKE HE DIDNT THINK HI RHYME THROUGH

1-0 thanks for the vote still uppin for some more


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yo Dejure took this by far shots. the punches had a harder affect on my brain. both were tight but i was feelin dejures more

vote=dejure

1-1 still uppin for more votes

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uppin for votes

those rhymes remind me of baked beans lol. not bad flow but try reading a dictionary.

man if your not going to votte then don't free post

still uppin for some more votes

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D took this for the fact that the other nigga rhymes like a crackhead baby lol any way D took this cause he had more hard hitting punches, and his wordplay was way better

Yo do me a favor and hit up Kaotik Vs. CyKoShYnE

lolol man fucking newbies don't know shit about wordplay 1-2 still uppin for some more votes

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