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Voc 03-06-05 12:57 AM

True Crimes
 
Ok this is a little piece about crimes that really happen in urban areas

Black,white,hispanic,asain and jamicans all portray the life of thugs
Kill each other for a color when we all share the same color blood
Crips and Bloods taking the majority of black men soon they'll use children
To go around and kill rival gangs,skip school,sell drugs and start stealing
Growing up in a hood now days kids use gangs to have protection
But at the end of the day a bodies found on the nearest intersection
Now there families crying asking for questions and what caused it
Why didn't they talk to there deceased child before they were put in a cauffin
It's a cycle the world going to say the same nothing going to change
But the younger minorities dead from violence of two rival gangs
Red,blue,green,yellow all are someones favorite color not worth dying over
Think other peoples beef and hatred isn't something you'd want your mother crying over

The Militant 03-06-05 01:00 AM

i was feelin this nice vocab nice flow good structre id give this 7/10
please return the favor in my open mic"it's over"

Voc 03-06-05 01:03 AM

Ok, thanks for the props and i'll get on leaving you props in your open mic

Kamikazee 03-06-05 01:08 AM

Niiiiiiiceeeeee shit homie...............................Pz RTF on one of my OM's

Voc 03-06-05 09:11 AM

Leave some more feed on this piece don't let it pass you by


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