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DQ 03-06-05 06:39 AM

Cyber Lovers
 
Cyber lovers is what they call us

But we're not

Naive fools is how they define us

But we're not


Two people that truly love each other

That's what we are

Impatient lovers, longing to be together

That's what we are
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I understand their ignorance, I do not despise them for it

Not at all

I only pity them for not knowing the true dimension of the heart

We don't need anyone's approval

Nothing else matters except us two
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Together we
You and me
Lovers
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.Judicial. 03-06-05 12:00 PM

this waz real good jess.....love you......

Lil C 03-06-05 12:44 PM

damn jess!!! u b gettin betta n betta as ya write! good shit girl, was really feelin dis shit, good structure, vocab n wat not....keep it up...1

DQ 03-06-05 12:51 PM

^Thanks for the feed girl :) you know how we do ;)

:love: (@ Judicial)

DQ

MC IgGY 03-06-05 06:30 PM

dats really good
i could deff picture this as a song

....Gone.... 03-06-05 09:13 PM

This shit was towards me right?...................

Red Stroke 03-06-05 10:07 PM

Yo I Hope This Was Only For Me, Coz If Not Who Ever This Was To About To Get Whacked, Dope Piece, Better Be For Me Girl, If Not Who Ever This Was To Whoa! Better Look Out, Lol

DQ 03-07-05 01:16 AM

Hehe, y'all crazy! But thanks for feed :)

DQ

Red Stroke 03-07-05 01:18 AM

Yes We, Is Lol Over You, I RTF For Ya, Go Peep My Scriptures

A_M_H 03-07-05 01:24 PM

yeah i like this piece u did that fo sho i feel ya on this 1 keep up the good work


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