J DOT vs TheFlowIsSick
 

Battle Rules:

10 barz
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 03-06-05 at 09:20 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed... did not drop enough lines

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 08:51 PM.

TheFlowIsSick has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 09:01 PM.

This nigga's a bitch, how u decline our battle so you can prewrite.. i gave you 45 minutes you need 24 hours thats sad now its over...

check it..


I topped ya hits, You talked slick, But i rocked ya scripts
You better than me? Yet You scared to put NOK at risk
No exceptions, Saying that J DOT got a chance just aint right
Ya verse wont do the trick, Like magicians with stage fright
And i know you afraid to battle me, I had you scrambled like eggs
You wanna break-fast, But ya wont when i dismantle ya legs
Take ya verbs and split, A battle with me ya dont deserve it bitch
Cuz you couldnt 'spit fresh', Even after swallowing 'certs or mints'
Gotcha shook, Lookin in amazement, Shit on ya rapbook pages
Edit your verse, Nah, Replace it, Dont forget to save the changes


Bring something dope.. this once again 15 min key you need 24........hours.. lets go

Look dude, ask about DOT, they say he’s rude
Cause I’m da nigga leave you smushed in like baby food
Pay ya dues, get cleared off, or you can get NOK’d out
Slugs clap at ya gums to make ya grill pop out
And I aint focused on ya chest, you don’t use that to rhyme
Instead….I’ll crack ya egg like its Easter Time
You wanna be too tall, ya similar to Rue Paul
When da beef is on you move out like U-Haul
Scary nigga, get smoked like a pack of Ports
My trigger finger itching like it got genital warts
The Flow’s sick? Stop there you got no room to boast
Cause closest you ever came to beef was meatloaf
JDOT not scared, you don’t succeed when you mug
And you cant ‘son’ nobody, cause you could barley get it up
You talk so tough, but really you got no guts
I’ll leave you in a box, like takeout at Pizza Hut
You want what? Speak my name, tha flow leave you sick
And yo Open Mic’s abandoned, nobody replied in it
You spit sick, DOT give you da flu wit no antidote
I’ll blast at ya punk ass, and cut u open like cantaloupe



If you want to hate on me, dont vote. And that means you!

10 barz bitch. you dont kno tha diff. between a bar and a line hoe? uppin for votes..............


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This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

I don't know I think J Dot came a little harder! But I can't vote so I'm uppin for feed good battle thou!

Yea. His Verse Was Ight. But I Still Think I Came A Lil Harder. My Punches Were Serioulsy Harder Than Urs. Real Talk. You Got Personals, But I Think I Took It...uppin

Voted For: J DOT


I topped ya hits, You talked slick, But i rocked ya scripts
You better than me? Yet You scared to put NOK at risk
No exceptions, Saying that J DOT got a chance just aint right
Ya verse wont do the trick, Like magicians with stage fright
And i know you afraid to battle me, I had you scrambled like eggs
You wanna break-fast, But ya wont when i dismantle ya legs
Take ya verbs and split, A battle with me ya dont deserve it bitch
Cuz you couldnt 'spit fresh', Even after swallowing 'certs or mints'
Gotcha shook, Lookin in amazement, Shit on ya rapbook pages
Edit your verse, Nah, Replace it, Dont forget to save the changes

decent vocab alright punches and metas .. i liked it but it wasnt at j dots level.. 5/10


IP:

Look dude, ask about DOT, they say he’s rude
Cause I’m da nigga leave you smushed in like baby food
Pay ya dues, get cleared off, or you can get NOK’d out
Slugs clap at ya gums to make ya grill pop out
And I aint focused on ya chest, you don’t use that to rhyme
Instead….I’ll crack ya egg like its Easter Time
You wanna be too tall, ya similar to Rue Paul
When da beef is on you move out like U-Haul
Scary nigga, get smoked like a pack of Ports
My trigger finger itching like it got genital warts
The Flow’s sick? Stop there you got no room to boast
Cause closest you ever came to beef was meatloaf
JDOT not scared, you don’t succeed when you mug
And you cant ‘son’ nobody, cause you could barley get it up
You talk so tough, but really you got no guts
I’ll leave you in a box, like takeout at Pizza Hut
You want what? Speak my name, tha flow leave you sick
And yo Open Mic’s abandoned, nobody replied in it
You spit sick, DOT give you da flu wit no antidote
I’ll blast at ya punk ass, and cut u open like cantaloupe

nice opener and closer.. it was a nice read alot of witty punches.. nice vocab.. nice flow.. your structure was key.. over all i thought you took this one because you kept the punches coming.. 7/10


over all jdot took it he jus had better vocab and punches i thought.. dot you had a llil to much self glorfication but otherwise nice drop

Vote//J dot

rtf with a honest vote links in the sig

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

ok are u kids serious thats why i hate front lines, the best bar u had was that meatloaf one..

and also a bar = 2 lines

if i said 10 bars that would mean 20 lines not lines

you know what a line is dont you

.................................................. ...... << line

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.................................................. ...... << bar

^dumb fuck. stop bitching. read tha rules. it says 10 BARS...20 lines. yo dumb ass did 10 LINES


hahahaha...once again. you cant son nobody....

you could barely get it up...hahahaha!

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

check polls of this shit..........................

uppin this for real votes, and J DOT our battle before you bitched out cuz you needed to prewrite was only 10 lines so i figured you would keep it the same

^ight. i prewrote. whatever you say. i got no time to be sittin somewhere writing a fuckin verse for a internet site. i wrote that shit 10 minutes b4 i dropped it in a word document. stop bitchin ho.

This was feedback posted for TheFlowIsSick
 

checkin polls.....................................