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Kamikazee 03-06-05 10:14 PM

10 line Freestyle (Diss)
 
Jimmy Pocketz didnt want it so i know Tony Green dont want it either,
And Tony Green is prolly all ova Pocket'z-rocket like pubs on his peter
I done told yall motha fuckas once but for da record FUCK yall bitches,
Fill ur ass full of holes and send u to "ER" so they can fill u wit stiches
NOK some gangstas what? ill have a car come shoot up ya chill spot,
Tony thinkin hes hot what? ill jus run up on u wit dat shank in da parkin lot
Yall now rappin wit one of RV's finest ".:BlazE:." a.k.a. "Unstoppable Flowz",
Back talk and we will leave u wit a black eye from us pimp slappin all u hoez
Im going to welcome yall to my zone cuz right now yall in my territory,
My rhymes r to good for yalls, yall couldnt see me even if u stood be4 me



Fuck All Yall fo da last time yall want any more jus holla back PUSSIES

Kamikazee 03-06-05 10:37 PM

Uppin ids shit is a nice verse..................Pz

The Militant 03-06-05 10:40 PM

ya didnt come hard enough ya could diss em hard ya had a good couple first lines but the end of it was weak no hat though man 5/10

Kamikazee 03-07-05 12:22 AM

...................................uppin.......... ...........................

TheFlowIsSick 03-07-05 12:29 AM

1st bar was the dopest bar i've ever seen from you.. but you got wacker and wacker as you went along.. shorten your lines up, it fucks up the flow and the structure

Kamikazee 03-07-05 03:15 PM

..............................uppin............... ...................

Dex 03-07-05 03:32 PM

was an alrite verse, nice punches, good disses but it wouldnt be enough to go up against those heads, but your coming along.

6.5/10

~Tony Green~ 03-07-05 03:36 PM

I said the beef was over but you still want it okay! Your bitch ass got it coming!

Kamikazee 03-07-05 04:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Green
I said the beef was over but you still want it okay! Your bitch ass got it coming!


HAHA im really scared of ur bitch ass rhymes......ur trash kid......give it up

~Tony Green~ 03-07-05 04:16 PM

I murdered your ass even your own mans said I got the best outta both of you!
But I'm done with the beef read my O.M. "Beef Is"


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