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Mentor 03-07-05 01:32 AM

punchline N' Structure Practice
 
throw it up for this keystyle
nuthin but a basic freestyle
to help my structure out
that's all this is about
so skip this if you want
cuz i'm not even tryin ta front
get it out and light a blunt
like 50 i'll show u how ta stunt
fuck your bitch in her cunt
this is all you'll love ta humble
if this was football u'd fumble
so are you ready ta rumble??
get tackled and tumble
run rite through and drop 'em
what bitch you got a problem
load your guns and cock 'em
let off and blast off
make the cemetary a daily drop off
snort coke, sneeze, then cough
stab your ass with a spear like Troy
leave leave ya stutterin' like Waterboy
m-m-m-my mama said fuzeballs the devil
no i am and u ain't nowhere near my level
more charged up than 10 Duracell factories
makin' 1000 fresh batteries
i am completely paranoid
while i'm hittin' this up like an asteroid
makin' words up callin' u a homotoid
u like suckin' cock and getting it on poloroid
that kinda shit leaves me annoyed
see if i give a fuck
if u got bad feedback then try ta hit me up
tell me what u think is 'sup

Mentor 03-07-05 10:19 AM

uppin...........

The Militant 03-07-05 04:20 PM

Im Glad This Was Practice Cuase U Can Do Alot Better Come On Man But Structre Was Good Lol...rhymes Not That Good But Good Flow....punches Were Okay 2... Return The Favor Please In One Of My Open Mics

Mentor 03-07-05 04:31 PM

yo i was only practicing so i could get the hang of the structure thing and personally i think i have the best punchlines i ever did in hear especially with the waterboy part

The Militant 03-07-05 04:36 PM

please return the favor in my open mic "all these drugs"


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