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One M.B. vs Kesse
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6 - 14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-07-05 at 09:08 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 08:10 PM.
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one man in your band...well i'd think differently after seeing your battles
had so many dick riders voting, probly had their own personalized saddles revoulutionary?....what next, you going to claim that your dog can purr well in a sense you did change the site, everyone knew what whack multies were says your from heaven, thats because your RV days are over with...expired tryin to come back? but you need skill, and i dont think that was ever acquired this battle wont be close, like a blind man hitting a target with a bow n' arrow its like your writing all your verses in hyroglyphics, but shit, you aint no pharoah its obvious why your called One MB, when it comes to you, nobody really cares how do i know? just look at your sig, even jimi looks disappointed to be there you may be the multi-master, but sooner or later, your title will get stripped you can keep it for now, im not one for multies, just here to give you an ass-whip i can tell your nervous, so ill finish this up leaving your mouth tasting salty but take this loss positive, just learned that battles can be won without using multies ________________________ explans: uh, made some sig, profile and user title references in there, but you dont get the rest dont vote *gl yo.....haha, i'll be stoaked just to get 1 vote! ....word |
One M.B. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 08:33 PM.
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Catching a beat down as I break you into pieces like a kit kat Just one round, screw the chit-chat, rap called, and it wants its shit back This whole battle was a mismatch… Fuck you, and fuck a fight, bitch You just cant hang with me……..…. Cos ya hung like a light switch Im bright, kid…Ill leave ya sun burnt… i got you shook in sections, You’ll have a redneck…. Like cats that supported the bush election you call me a tyrant 'n shit, but im the illest with rhymin 'n spits, I don’t need to try to spit sick… cos half this damn site is ridin my dick, i could sit here all day, dissin on K, 'n straight harrassin him, But ill let up…'cos like playin truth or dare, ya games embarrassin.. When I made a call out I didn’t expect some wack kids reply.. And I cant use personals…….. cos who the fuck is this guy? ya shit to diss, no punches….. there aint no teachin this slob, you like a door salesman.. ya only way to success is reachin fa knobs, |
Voted For: One M.B.
Kesse structure was alright.. some of your lines were stretched though.. flow fell off a little due to the stretchness.. you had a few multis.. wordplay was alright at times.. some of your concepts were decent, some were below average.. a few of your punches connected.. you had a good personal in there.. Quotables- revoulutionary?....what next, you going to claim that your dog can purr well in a sense you did change the site, everyone knew what whack multies were you may be the multi-master, but sooner or later, your title will get stripped you can keep it for now, im not one for multies, just here to give you an ass-whip One M.B. structure is good.. flow is on target.. you had some nice multis.. wordplay is pretty good at times.. like Kesse, some of your concepts were good.. some were played out.. some of your punches connected.. no good personals.. Quotables Catching a beat down as I break you into pieces like a kit kat Just one round, screw the chit-chat, rap called, and it wants its shit back Im bright, kid…Ill leave ya sun burnt… i got you shook in sections, You’ll have a redneck…. Like cats that supported the bush election Overall Kesse had better personals.. both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. both had alright wordplay.. One M.B. had more multis.. more consistently decent concepts.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. this was a pretty good battle, but i have One M.B. taking it.. VOTE - ONE M.B. Please hit up the link in my sig.. |
^ well, that was quik.........haha, giddy..........
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^ First new text battle i saw open in this forum.
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This was feedback posted for Kesse
Checking the polls....
*gl yo.....haha, i'll be stoaked just to get 1 vote! ....word ^ I like that........ |
This was feedback posted for One M.B.
just checking pollz
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.........up...de la fuck...................bitches
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Voted For: One M.B.
ya'll got your own style that works... i dont know which way to go so imma just check the polls Vote removed |
Voted For: One M.B.
Word I dont think I need to explain this one.. OMB got it without a doubt.. Kesse...........Most your lines were as stretched as a nympho commin out of a gangbang.. And you forced rhymes a lot.. Shit didnt flow.. Thats pretty much all I gotta say so for the remainder of this vote I will randomly press keys on my keyboard.. weopvgfisjvgoiwergfiowerhoaihiovgfosdfivgosfidvgoi sfvgniosrjvgioerwgiowrgneriowngiowrngiowrgnviosngi osrnfviowrnvfoinriovgnowrivgfnwriovgniowrgnvoeriwn goasnvzncvizxbcuiwerncionruiowncvosdnpiovcjsiopvji osdnviouashp8hfpohaiophpasiohviophasvouiwhsiovhiow ehjvevfopuiawhvuipshuivhcruishvuiopsviodvhuiowdcui ohoihjcfoqjeiojfewciuhaiscjioc90jwdiohweuiocoashco asdicouads90c0239uweiojiowasuc9c903cjioasdciopasdj cuiohaciojdojipwju03u093cowijidfjadiojioadfsjiopad fjaicioandoicnasdiocvniosdvniosdvniosdnviosdnviosn iocnsdiocnioasdcjiojasciojdasiocjio3jioixojiowjfoi 23jioj234iojiodjiojio That will be all.. Thankyou.. V/OMB |
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