aint life a fucker!?!? (new dex open mic)
 

Bit of advice, someone once told dex
Save the whales, collect the whole set
Keep fundings on tap, forget making bets
Bills travel the post much quicker than cheques
………………..………best not forget

I wish someone told me this before now
0r money would grow in my garden somehow
Spent the pound signs, now financial come-down
Sinking back to reality sure aint fun now

Dumb-down my life to job that’s mundane
Damn! A seventh of my life stuck in Monday
One day hoping to throw back the vails
Pull up the chain, free myself and set sail

uppin. any feedback from you bunch of fuckers!>?

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feedback

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lol aint no one givin u feedback... anywayz i thought it was good you got your message across... but maybe it could'av been a bit longer? other than tht it was good welcome back :thumbup: 7.5/10

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yo i like your oppen mics and all,i find it fun to read bcuz you spell everything right and perfect structure,very nice man,we should collab once,good drop:thumbup:

Good shit fam......good structure good flow good wordplay all around good verse homie........8/10......Pz RTF link in da sig