Dex vs Kordozar
 

[Colr=Sandybrown]Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting[/Color]

Minimum posts to vote: 450

Check in by: 03-09-05 at 12:08 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Closed - Expired / old battle win

Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 04:53 PM.

Dex has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 07:28 PM.

Battle of six lines, My sick lines will spit shine
Ur greatness is fake shit, each lyrics a crime
Signed rappers in ur town, shit that’s too rare
Where the men are men, and sheep are scared!
He preaches to masses of asses forming a line
And battles like an assassin.. always from behind

Voted For: Dex

you got this man you both came weak but you made more sense in your rap scheme any way better multis punches structure and opener and closer were better

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Voted For: Dex

Dex:

Battle of six lines, My sick lines will spit shine
Ur greatness is fake shit, each lyrics a crime
^^dope multies 8/10
Signed rappers in ur town, shit that’s too rare
Where the men are men, and sheep are scared!
^^lmao funny bar 7/10
He preaches to masses of asses forming a line
And battles like an assassin.. always from behind
^^ good closer 7/10

Overall : 22/30 (73%)

Kordozar:

Studies Hamoprhodytes,His Punches Works Off Ciaras 1 2 Step...
Not Juss Me The Average Card Player Then Put A Finger In "Dex"...
^^dope meta decent set up 8/10
He's Gay His Occupation Says That He Only Owns Two Men
Stop Rapping Even You're Aliases Doesn't Know What It's Doing
^^ ehh decent 6/10
Ukessex,The Dex,Weedex In Other Words He's All Trash..
I Only Say He's A Pussy Because Thiss Homo Was Born Without A Ball Sacc...
^^good closer 7/10

Overall: 21/30 (70%)

Vote: Dex

Return the favor with an honest vote please!!

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=2011362

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amn it bro i know they aint explaining this shit properly, but who does anymore?

lets not make this an epic bro. Votes are votes... for you or me

This was feedback posted for Dex
 

ok you win nuff siad

you had hella multies which where honestly all wack, but your strucuture was decent, could have used some personals and some wordplay or atleast have some punches, your whole verse was fucking fillers, try to eleavte alot more, once you get about 30 wins you will be good, just stay up and dont leave the site becuase you will eleavte soon enuff

Kordozar...Ok that font color shit was wack you need to first fix that then go back and work on your strucuture you the prime example on why records are worthless, alos you had some decent shit but you loose becuase your font color and your strucuture, nuff said

^^damn it ho, why didnt u vote????????????????????????????????

uppin for a blatant win.,............................................. ..

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Voted For: Kordozar


Kordozar
Nice Verse Man You Had Some Cool Punches Very Creative On This One, Personals Was There Man I Was Feeling Your Vocabulary, Structure Man It's Cool One Stretched Line That Was Your Closer, This Verse Was Dope For A Come Back, I Was Feeling The Opener The Most Nice

Dex
It Was A Cool Verse, i Wasn't Feeling The Personals Though, And The Punches Wasn't To Great, But It was Hitting, Structre, I See You Elevated On That, One THing Man Vocabulary You Need To Up That, And Change Up Your Rhyme Scheme, And You Could Add Some Meta's To Make It More Dope

Vote-Kord

Yo RTF On Me VS Lingustics, Not The One In My Sig Yo, And Explain It To, Me Vs Linguistics, I'll Up It So You Can Find It

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