Soul
 

Screams of confusion echo through the hollows of my soul..
and you say hollow trees have no soul..
they branch out and are bound strictly to the sky..
because the sky is the limit..
I once saw a tree that reached so high, i wondered..
how could I never be so insignificant?
How could anything such as this be held lower in regard to a man..
who instead of reaching for the stars, he looks down on everything..
from the clouds, blinding him with the distorted reflection of his own image..
a man who's race would let them stand for nothing, but fall for anything..
Soul isn't an emotion, or a notion, or what you think or how you act..
soul is what you represent as a creation of God
so if Hollow trees have no soul..
why do the hollows of my soul echo with confusion?

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Wow...this was a excellent poem man.. It was very short, but had alot of meaning.. The vocab wasn't needed here at all because of your meaning. I also really like how u compare man to a tree.. very different.. good job man ;)..

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nice i was feel'n this... nice visuals .. also i liked ur vocab...keep it simple... and if ya have to go big make sure it fits in with the context of the poem... again def feel'n this nice.

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Nice job, i liked your vocabulary here, short but to the point..keep dropping..1

I really loved the concept of your poem, good creative thinking on this one. Found a nice balance with your vocab, not too basic but not too complicated either and it was suited for the content of your poem. Strong aspects were emotion and imagery for sure, the different levels in your poem, the way you worded certain things made me stop and think about it. Really good job!

DQ