J-Money vs uhhhwhatupb
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-08-05 at 06:57 PM

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uhhhwhatupb has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 06:28 PM.

they call you j-money like you spit sum good shit...
you illiterit nigga, i saw your other battles...no punches hit
in your sig is that your quote or what?
when my punches hit they 're like a knife they stab, twist, then cut
do you know the definition of J-money. its definintly not you
we merk you, then defeat you...you didnt think this battle through
i sense defeat in this battle in the air im not quite sure if its me or you
ima unique type of battles, im tha streets diciple..
fuck wit officail killaz you might get ya adams apples sliced open
hes verses are pathetic, he has no vocabulary
after this battle i leave you ina pile of bones ina cemetary..
i dont need to battle you to gain my respect on this site..
just by tha name and the sig you call tell i can write tight..
they dont give you respect because you saying "nigga" and you probly strait white..
soo i gave myself mins to spit my verse ..buts thats all i need to ubolishe my opponent
with that time i can take you house comp and ill have your ass out my from yard sleeping in a tent
my rhimes might or might not make scense but you might be unvurnable to my senseitifity...
iLL willl be the one that send to hell for enternity

J-Money has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 06:44 PM.

so i hear u wanna battle so ima "start from scratch"
ima leave u gaspin for air like old ppl havin heart attacks
my verse is too complex for you,dawg, i know its hurtin your brain
when this is over, "my record" will anwser the words in your name
i see we're kinda even when it comes to record and posts
but the only time ur shit'll rock is when u step in a boat
ur shits a joke, itd prolly look even more corny on paper
dont freestyle, stick to sheets like horny teenagers

Voted For: J-Money

J-money....this was a good battle j came wit hard hitting punchs an good werd play wit some personals he was consistent an he had better structure....uhhhwhat u had a good verse but u lacked in structure an consistent punchs an personals work on that no hate....good battle to both..RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=j
closer=j
structure=j
punchs=j
personal=tie
overall=J-money

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Voted For: J-Money

i thought this was a pretty basic battle...
j-money had a simple structure and flow, but i guess that's better than stretched lines and kinda screwy structure

vocab was basic, wordplay was aight from j-money's side (i was diggin the boat line, but could've been worded better)

whatup most of your punches were self-glorifying and so they came off kinda weak and weren't hitting... work on developing your wordplay and keeping a consistent flow throughout your verse and you'll elevate in no time dog, vocab on your end was tight

overall, gotta give it to j-money, no hate

return the favor please links in sig

Voted For: J-Money

checkin the polls for my homie's battles..........

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKK...didnt mean to vote, tried to leave feedback...someone should fuckin kick me off this site for being fuckin stupid

aight we gotta remove that last vote.. i dunno how tho

This was feedback posted for J-Money
 

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Voted For: J-Money

from both i'll have 2 say this was an ight battle none the less:
flow- i have 2 say it'z a tie on this 1 they both came wit
it in this category
punches- by both i feel a little bit of both ppl verses
were played, but j had more & hit harder
personals- i have 2 say j-money took this category cuz
all thru the battle he hit uhh wit plenty
multis- i have 2 give this category 2 uhh
vocab- both need 2 elevate more on this, but j came
wit it more
originality- even tho lines were played from both dukes,
overall both were like a tie 4 real

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Voted For: J-Money

aight
J got this............

J:
Ya verse was a little basic in places, but most of ya stuff was a punch or half decent wordplay, flow was right on point, structure was easy ta follow, not bad stuff, u got the win for the more consistancy, even tho u had like half the bars he did lol....

Uhhwhutupb:
verse was okay, started off a little weak, ya got goin eventually, but towards the end your structure n flow just fucked the hell up lol, it cost you the battle, decent ideas within your lines, just gotta word them better

no hate but J got this

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