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I'm sorry for loving you It's my own fault because I care too much too fast. I apologize for being sad when I don't get something from the person I love. But I'm only human I made mistakes but so did you. That's exactly why I love you, for your flaws as well as perfection. That's exactly why I want you to love me. I'm not sorry for being who I am and neither should you. We're just ordinary people who try to love each other the best we can. Won't you give us another chance to overcome the downs and enjoy the ups? ...Together... |
this had alot of emotion in it. i really liked it for its honesty. you have alot of talent... thats the key to a good poem i think .. i can tell this came str8 from you on this one... seriously a nice drop
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yeah u did put emotion in it & u got alot of good poems on this site but there b'in slept on but neway ur vocab was there, structure was on point, & i like how u elaborated into different topics by going into depth wit makes a good poet but make sure 2 return the favor in my poem: Wanna Change My Life??
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nice drop, good emotion, liked the simplicity of it too....keep doing what you do
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Very short and simple yet very emotional and different.. i really feel what your saying in this poem because i've went throught he exact same thing.. I also care way too fast for a person well a girl.. but its not a bad thing.. hopefully he gives you another chance... good luck 7,8/10
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