WEEK 9 (0-0) DEJURETHARAW VS (0-0) {¤Skïï~Blàzîng¤}
 

30 LINES MAX


MUST SIGN IN BY WEDNESDAY::


VERSES DUE FRIDAY MIDNIGHT::


IF YOU DO NOT SIGN IN BY WEDNESDAY,YOU WILL LOSE,IF YOU DO SIGN IN AND DONT POST BY FRIDAY YOU LOSE,IF THERE IS SOMEONE THAT SIGNS IN AND DOESNT POST A VERSE,YOU MUST POST AT LEAST TWO BARS FOR THE VICTORY

ok signin' in, droppin' tomorrow.

Do you mean 30 bars or lines?

sighnin in...I'll drop soon as possible

Dam thats messed up how they makin me battle another member of Ordo Abacho,O-well,ish happens here it go


Round 1:

I should work at a suicide hotline, when they call,l'll read-em-your-verse//they'll be stunned,at-first,becuz they didnt know things could-be-worst//You should really Re-herse!!
I'll let you go second, cuz I understand your Dum-rymes//Take time//you better find a ~Haiwian~ boxer, so he can improve on your ~Punch~ lines//
And see I dont Pre-write,I free-write, mean-while//you could steal from clothing stores, and still couldnt come up with a good ~Free~ style//
Heres a suggestion..... When you Letter-your-ryme//see how long it takes... then go faster,Its tha only way you'll be Ahead-of-your-time//
You claim to be Hard, you almost fooled me with ease//Then I thought "Please"// ~Blazing~ I relized, "I've never met a thug in my life that ~Skii's~"//
You need alot of help, because this is begining to look Un-Fair//even charter said "We cant help you,But get help somewhere"//
......your girl like"Dam, you got dissed By-Charter!!...you know wat tha problem is,its like our sex life, you just need to try-Harder"//............"well then again why Bother"....//

I'll break bone, with tha damage this line-do//you'll need a cast....think of it this way,now atleast somebodies willing to sign-you//
Did I blind-you??with my Seam-less-cunning//You Lose....It was over before it began,You must be blind!!, You couldnt See-this-coming??//

crew will be watchin, lol

Bit Late, but ya know. Shit happens.

Mentally surgin’, when I get the urge to split DeJurs mind in-to-thirds/
Your inevitably cursed, makin’ split decisions isn’t going to win-you-first/
His verse? absolutly absurd, because you could'nt beat me if i-was-you/
I'm droppin' like monsoons, i've seen more intellect at fast foods drive-thru's/
Undeveloped talent like in wombs, similies will immediatly decease-you-instantly/
You failed miserably, bankin' on them rhymes could never increase-your-credibility/
He spittin' played rhymes, could'nt blaze and shyne if he were in a club and caught-with-a-9/
No line scheme to find, use your own blood spurt to quench my thirst 'cos dawg-you-wine/
And when the stars align, my words confuse you like bald peeps with hairline-fractures/
I'm a lion sizin' an antilope like a watcher, if i'm asked if i got game your-my-capture/
Anything else i could conjur? i'll make your teeth completly dissapear out-of-the-blue/
Couldn't divide me if i were 2, and if you were the best ever MC then nobody-had-a-clue/
Set pulses racin' when i manuver, i'm so ill i'll strangle you with-the-cordless/
Rebelious worker never takin' orders, advanced skills so i could murder your-future-daughters/
Better abort this, you actin' like an asswipe so you could try and steal chino XL's shit/
but just admit it, i could get signed if i ditched my own and started rhymin' usin' your lyrics/

fuck it

:mad:

This was a good battle. DeJure came with a few hard hitters here n there, but I felt skii took it by originality and his punches hit just a lil harder than DeJure's. Plus skii stayed consistent wit his multis which displayed added skill and strength to the punches. Good battle both.

This battle was crazy...My respect goes out to both but I think DeJure the Raw took this one, because his whole verse was packed with punchlines....my fav were:



Those were some hard hittin' bars but the most that caught my eye was this:


Good battle yall but my vote goes to Dejure tha raw...peep ma battle....1

I should work at a suicide hotline, when they call,l'll read-em-your-verse//they'll be stunned,at-first,becuz they didnt know things could-be-worst//You should really Re-herse!!-DEJURE

That shit was ill, i liked that line

He spittin' played rhymes, could'nt blaze and shyne if he were in a club and caught-with-a-9/
{¤Skïï~BlÃ-zîng¤}
that was kinda coo, shit made me laugh

i read both verse like twice and i think dejure edged it with betta punches nahmean?

good battle

BREAKDOWN::
 

DEJURETHARAW::


I should work at a suicide hotline, when they call,l'll read-em-your-verse//they'll be stunned,at-first,becuz they didnt know things could-be-worst//You should really Re-herse!!

NOT A GOOD OPENER TOO ME,SETUP WAS PRETTY COOL,BUT YOUR PUNCH WAS WEAK MAN,SHOULD OF CAME WITH SOME CREATIVE SHIT HERE,IT WOULD OF BEEN HOT,BUT ANYWAYS THIS OPENER WASNT REALLY FEELING


I'll let you go second, cuz I understand your Dum-rymes//Take time//you better find a ~Haiwian~ boxer, so he can improve on your ~Punch~ lines//

PLAYED CONCEPT HERE,THE HAWAIN PUNCHLINE SHIT IS TOO OLD MAN,MAYBE NOT TO YOU BUT TO ME IT IS,I THOUGHT IT WOULD OF BEEN NICE IF YOU REWORDED IT,BUT STILL PLAYED.

And see I dont Pre-write,I free-write, mean-while//you could steal from clothing stores, and still couldnt come up with a good ~Free~ style//

KINDA OF A FILLER TYPE LINES HERE,NOTHING REALLY WENT WELL,SETUP NOT FEELING,AND PUNCH LINE NOT FEELING,I THINK IF YOU CONCENTRATED ON THE SETUP MORE IT WOULD OF CAME TO BE A MORE OF AN EFFECTIVE PUNCH


Heres a suggestion..... When you Letter-your-ryme//see how long it takes... then go faster,Its tha only way you'll be Ahead-of-your-time//
You claim to be Hard, you almost fooled me with ease//Then I thought "Please"// ~Blazing~ I relized, "I've never met a thug in my life that ~Skii's~"//

THE FIRST LINE WAS A PRETTY GOOD SETUP,BUT YOU FOLLOWED WITH A WEAK PUNCH,COME ON MAN,I THOUGHT THIS COULD OF BEEN A GOOD COUPLET HERE,BUT YOU FUCKED IT UP WITH THE WEAK PUNCH,JUST REMEMBER TO COME MORE CREATIVE ON YOUR PUNCHLINES


You need alot of help, because this is begining to look Un-Fair//even charter said "We cant help you,But get help somewhere"//
......your girl like"Dam, you got dissed By-Charter!!...you know wat tha problem is,its like our sex life, you just need to try-Harder"//............"well then again why Bother"....//

NOT TOO BAD OF A SETUP AGAIN,BUT YOU CAME AGAIN WITH THE PUNCH WHICH WAS REALLY WEAK,AND WAY TOO STRETCHED..


I'll break bone, with tha damage this line-do//you'll need a cast....think of it this way,now atleast somebodies willing to sign-you//
Did I blind-you??with my Seam-less-cunning//You Lose....It was over before it began,You must be blind!!, You couldnt See-this-coming??//

AGAIN NOT A GOOD ENDING..OR SETUP PUNCH COMBO,YOU NEED TO COME REALLY HARD AT THIS POINT TO MAKE THE READER VOTE FOR YOU ,WHICH YOU DIDNT,BUT OK VERSE


SKI BLAZING::


Mentally surgin’, when I get the urge to split DeJurs mind in-to-thirds/
Your inevitably cursed, makin’ split decisions isn’t going to win-you-first/

NOT BAD OF AN OPENER,NICE MULTIS ALSO,BUT I THOUGHT THE SETUP WAS NICE,BUT CAME WEAK FOR THE PUNCH FOR THE SECOND,I FELT IF YOU CAME HARD THERE IT WOULD OF BEEN NICE


His verse? absolutly absurd, because you could'nt beat me if i-was-you/
I'm droppin' like monsoons, i've seen more intellect at fast foods drive-thru's/

NOT FEELING THIS SHIT HERE,SETUP WAS OK,NOTHING SPECIAL,THEN YOU GO INTO YOU DROP LIKE A MONSOON,THEN SEEN MORE INTELLECT AT FAST FOOD DRIVE THRUS,NOT DOING IT FOR ME,IT WAS REALLY WEAK FILLER TYPE SHIT MAN,JUST COME WITH WITTY SHIT HERE


Undeveloped talent like in wombs, similies will immediatly decease-you-instantly/
You failed miserably, bankin' on them rhymes could never increase-your-credibility/

NOT BAD,ALSO NOT TOO EFFECTIVE


He spittin' played rhymes, could'nt blaze and shyne if he were in a club and caught-with-a-9/
No line scheme to find, use your own blood spurt to quench my thirst 'cos dawg-you-wine/

OK SETUP,WEAK PUNCH YO


And when the stars align, my words confuse you like bald peeps with hairline-fractures/
I'm a lion sizin' an antilope like a watcher, if i'm asked if i got game your-my-capture/

TOO BASIC,HERE,NOT HARD HITTING EITHER


Anything else i could conjur? i'll make your teeth completly dissapear out-of-the-blue/
Couldn't divide me if i were 2, and if you were the best ever MC then nobody-had-a-clue/

STRETCHED,WAY TOO STRETCHED


Set pulses racin' when i manuver, i'm so ill i'll strangle you with-the-cordless/
Rebelious worker never takin' orders, advanced skills so i could murder your-future-daughters/

THIS I WAS FEELING,BUT WISH THE SETUP WAS A LITTLE BETTER THOUGH


Better abort this, you actin' like an asswipe so you could try and steal chino XL's shit/
but just admit it, i could get signed if i ditched my own and started rhymin' usin' your lyrics/

NOT A GOOD ENDING EITHER,WASNT FEELING IT MAN,NEED TO COME HARD HERE,COME WITHA COOL ENDING.



UMM OK BATTLE NOTHING SPECTACULAR STOOD OUT HERE,IN EITHER VERSE,I THOUGHT DEJURE NEEDS TO WORK ON SOME SETUPS AND PUNCHS AND AS WELL AS SKI DOES,COME MORE CREATIVE TOO BOTH,USE WITTY CONCEPTS ALSO,AND CUT DOWN ON THE STRETCHED AND FILLER BULLSHIT,UMM I WAS GOING TO GIVE THIS TOO SKI,HE STARTED OFF COOL,BUT JUST LOSSED ME WITH SIMPLY GARBAGE SHIT,NOTHING REALLY HITTING,DEJURE I THOUGHT CAME OK,ON SOME PARTS SOME WERE ALSO NOT HITTING ,BUT HE ENTERTAINED ME MORE EVEN IT DIDNT SOUND IT IN MY QUOTEING


VOTE DEJURETHARAW

Both verses seemd liek they coulda spent a lil more time on them.. Most of the parts were tied(punchs,meta,multi,ect..)

Over all dejure Edge this battle from skii to me, came with a few less fillers, and a bit harder punchs... Good battle to both yall tho..

Vote- Raw

OnE

vote-Raw

that cast line took it. Both had fire but the cast line pusghed Raw over the edge

UP FOR VOTES

DEJURETHARAW WINS
 

DEJURETHARAW- 1-0



SKI BLAZING- 0-1