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..Decree.. 03-10-05 07:48 AM

I Need Answers
 
yea tryin to get bak on text after audio is hard to make good text lmao just suttin i wrote real quick...


i need answers for kid's dien of hunger,
immortal souls create a life style of blunder,
why are my methods questioned by superiors,
why am i suggested evil when i crack criterias,
knowledge is key but why are we not learnin?,
college is not for everyone so why is crack the only way for a earnin?,
life is hell an im burnin acclaimed criticaly,
books are not given witch proceeds ilitercy,
why do terrorist prevail diplomatic immunity,
when we cant stop the violence in our community?,
im hopeless forged a pattern to block out the information,
facts are proven we still loosin aids effect the male-patients,
trip said it best somebody tell me we all convicted,
my emotions crypted scripted,but my feelings restricted,
my lyrics manafested with truth and a key point of view,
adopted children with no home to live in, are forever tombed,
trapped inside a womb hopefully soon he will be exumed,
why is this country based on drug currency,?
why dont you listen but the blind can see,?
ill put you in retrospect kids reppin sets lets get political,
why can we talk about guns but when we get real the messages prevail subliminal,
i dont need to use vocabulary and get complex for you to hear me,
killin us is sex but when i talk real you parental advise me an fear me,
my hesitation is what im facen races can breed it,
i could serve knowledge for 20 pages who really would read it,?

Dirty Nigga 03-10-05 08:32 AM

Decent stuff V!
Flow was right on point..
got a kinda Nas feel too ya rhymes in this peice, deep stuff, message was decent, lyrics were nice, vocab was strong, flow was on point like i said, overrall the peice was hot!
i wouldnt mind collabin wit'chu at some point, we got 2 diffrent styles that could mix well on an O.M, dope stuff tho
8.5/10
keep 'em comin, good ta have some realness back into the world of textin an open mics

Peace out

..Decree.. 03-10-05 08:41 AM

lmao word yea after audio im soo rusty at text so ima prolly drop couple mo om's today thnkz for tha feed =1=..

convicted 03-10-05 09:34 AM

LIKED THIS PIECE MAN WORD PLAY WAS WAY THA FUCK OUT THERE
OVERALL REALY ENJOYED READIN IT ...........HOLLA at SOME OF MY OPEN MICS
JUST IGNORE THAT LITLLE BItCHx-cell HE DOESNT KNOW WAT BITES
8.5/10

..Decree.. 03-10-05 09:59 AM

uppin.........................


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