Shots Fired.... New JOINT
 

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SONG::::: SHOTS FIRED
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/wordmanmusic.htm




http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2014799

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2014811

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listening. chorus is pretty trippy. i dont really like the effect you used on ya vocals here. it kinda makes it sound cheap. the beat is kinda boring except on the chorus. but your drop is actually alright. you definately got potential if you keep working and improve your flow. and your lyrics are sorta a bid average. rappin about guns n shit its all been done before know what i mean? try to put something down that is more relevant that will impact someone who listens to it. try to connect with em. aiight man. good shit.

beat is a lil repatitive and boring...ur flow is on beat mostly. lyrical content aint that bad, you tried to spit a few bars with vocab and not simple gun bussin lines. quality is decent...not bad man :thumbup: keep dropping

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181190 - RTF man

i aint feelin tha beat flow is pretty decent lyrics were aiight overall decent drop need some work but you def got potential...=1=

thanks for the feed guys, much appricated.. imma return the fav..

ok........ya voice is cool....the lyrics were coool...ya flow fell off at times...but it was tight....the chorus..was pretty cool....but yeah..this was an ok track....about a 6.5/10.....good job man..

old school type beat wit that kick and shit....................yeh the vox effect is crazy on your voice, not bad, your riding the beat good, but thats a good beat to ride, not the my favorite track that I have heard on here yet, let me give it a 2nd listen...........................ok, its a lil too gangster of a track for somebody on here, but I kno rap is like wrestling, but your voice just doesnt have that gangster gun shit in it........its not a bad thing, im just saying if Jadakiss spit some of the shit you are saying, people would b like, yeh, thats dope, but your voice isnt like his.............the 2nd verse kind of falls off, but you get it back on. it wasnt a bad drop, maybe it just wasnt my tea cup, i dug the beat, and your delivery. not a bad drop at all, and im not hating, im just stating, peace

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181336

Thanks for the feed guys.. immma get at your Drops in the morning

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