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Young Phrophecy vs Hot Sauce
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-13-05 at 09:18 PM Must drop verse in 8400 minutes after check in. |
Young Phrophecy has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-05 09:23 PM.
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Hot Sauce has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 07:47 AM.
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PAIN-IS-SOUGHT when i AIM-THE-SHOTS, If I Put Ya mind in subways You Still Couldnt Keep Ya TRAIN-OF-THOUGHT//I'll go crucial and blast ya with NINES-N-TECHS and DIVIDE-YA-NECK You Coming Shitty Like Major Medicines With A SIDE-EFFECT//u SHORTER-THAN-YA-THOUGHTS Ill Misplace Ya Eyes Back wards So You Cant Look FORWARD-TA-THIS-LOSS//I'LL BLAZE-YA-HEAD put u in ya PLACE-WIT-TECKS I Should turn The Mourgue Into In An Adoption Center Because My Scripts RAISE-THE-DEAD//L's I'll HAND-HIM Your Punches Are Like Sky-Divers Without A Parachute Because You Cant LAND-THEM//i can BARE-YA-SHOOK found some TEARS-IN-THE-ROOK, I dont think u know where u stand even your influences dont know WHERE-TA-LOOK// Let me TRY-THIS as I APPLY-FISTS Ill spit on the Casket YA-LIE-WITH so ill give a big fuck you so just DIE-BITCH//
Finisher: Your "Garbage raps" dont TEND TO OFFEND ME WHEN HE "Recycles his verses"i dont "mind" cuz hes ENVIROMENTALLY FREINDLY! so im takin the ~GREEN, PEACE~, 2 put an end to Ur MEAN STREAK",another TEEN BEAT "put the shots at this Nerds head" to show how i "CREAM GEEKS"...(AYY) and its LAME how YOU-GRIP-DICKS,now you'll See "WHOS NOT THE BOSS", i GOT THE LOSS ,till im puttin your ~"BRAIN ON A CRUSIFIX" to get your "THOUGHTS ACROSS"~ openup *SHOPS,ON BLOCKS, ATTRACTING THIS BULLSHIT,grab the "SWITCH" and ~PULL IT~...no FULL CLIPS, cuz ur SHOTS ARE LOST,got ppl ASKIN ~BITCH WHERE ARE THE BULLETS |
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Ya people ask "where the bullets?", They lay in ya chest//
Cuz you attempt to test power of my motion sence gun torrets// and since when do i recycle my rhymes// My flow is focused like hocus pocus, voo doo that you do, I'll curse ya hearses// You couldn't apply fist if I taught you Kung-Fu// You just mad cuz i flipped the script, and you can't do shit like Young do// You must be confused, You're the one ther that grips dicks// Suckin off sick shit, hope you fuckin catch syphyllis |
Voted For: Hot Sauce
hot sauce won this easily punches were tight wordplay was ight multies were crazy rhymes were good flow was really good structre was ight work on it a lil bit 6.5/10 best line--- Let me TRY-THIS as I APPLY-FISTS Ill spit on the Casket YA-LIE-WITH so ill give a big fuck you so just DIE-BITCH please RTF in my battle link in my sig |
Voted For: Hot Sauce
hot sauce got this.. but duke stop putting those lame explanations and this shit , my-verse-is-garbage.. is just makes u look hella newbish.. but at least u had multi's and some nice punches other dudes verse was pure ass.. both of u need elevation badly.. but hot sauce gets this due to his weak attempts at punches and some nice multi's.. so no hate to either.. u just both need alot of work.. iight pz... |
Voted For: Hot Sauce
Hot Sauce PAIN-IS-SOUGHT when i AIM-THE-SHOTS, If I Put Ya mind in subways You Still Couldnt Keep Ya TRAIN-OF-THOUGHT//I'll go crucial and blast ya with NINES-N-TECHS and DIVIDE-YA-NECK You Coming Shitty Like Major Medicines With A SIDE-EFFECT//u SHORTER-THAN-YA-THOUGHTS Ill Misplace Ya Eyes Back wards So You Cant Look FORWARD-TA-THIS-LOSS//I'LL BLAZE-YA-HEAD put u in ya PLACE-WIT-TECKS I Should turn The Mourgue Into In An Adoption Center Because My Scripts RAISE-THE-DEAD//L's I'll HAND-HIM Your Punches Are Like Sky-Divers Without A Parachute Because You Cant LAND-THEM//i can BARE-YA-SHOOK found some TEARS-IN-THE-ROOK, I dont think u know where u stand even your influences dont know WHERE-TA-LOOK// Let me TRY-THIS as I APPLY-FISTS Ill spit on the Casket YA-LIE-WITH so ill give a big fuck you so just DIE-BITCH// Finisher: Your "Garbage raps" dont TEND TO OFFEND ME WHEN HE "Recycles his verses"i dont "mind" cuz hes ENVIROMENTALLY FREINDLY! so im takin the ~GREEN, PEACE~, 2 put an end to Ur MEAN STREAK",another TEEN BEAT "put the shots at this Nerds head" to show how i "CREAM GEEKS"...(AYY) and its LAME how YOU-GRIP-DICKS,now you'll See "WHOS NOT THE BOSS", i GOT THE LOSS ,till im puttin your ~"BRAIN ON A CRUSIFIX" to get your "THOUGHTS ACROSS"~ openup *SHOPS,ON BLOCKS, ATTRACTING THIS BULLSHIT,grab the "SWITCH" and ~PULL IT~...no FULL CLIPS, cuz ur SHOTS ARE LOST,got ppl ASKIN ~BITCH WHERE ARE THE BULLETS Easy 1 hot sauce great structure nice rhymes and terific elevation 9.5/10 Young Prophecy Ya people ask "where the bullets?", They lay in ya chest// Cuz you attempt to test power of my motion sence gun torrets// and since when do i recycle my rhymes// My flow is focused like hocus pocus, voo doo that you do, I'll curse ya hearses// You couldn't apply fist if I taught you Kung-Fu// You just mad cuz i flipped the script, and you can't do shit like Young do// You must be confused, You're the one ther that grips dicks// Suckin off sick shit, hope you fuckin catch syphyllis 2 short he murked u wit more harder punches elevate more be more agressive wen spittn bette structure 7/10 my v/hot sauce |
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Uppin............Ayo, just a comment..........I really didn't have time to finish my verse but whateva get goin wit it.
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Voted For: Hot Sauce
Hot Sauce- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........ Yun P- your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10....... V/Hot Sauce make sure 2 return the favor |
Voted For: Hot Sauce
young prophecy~hmm, ok opener,your 2nd bar was stretched a bit,and rhymes doesnt rhyme with hearses, seemed like a floating sentence, you have the idea,but it seems like your forcing words to fit together, not a bad verse,syphillis and dicks doesnt rhyme either, hmm, no effective punches here, and no personals either, could use some work on your verses,no hate, but elevate, try to use personals and mulites, it helps..1 hot sauce~ok, first let me say that your verse is LOUD, not a bad way to set it up, nice opener, strong multies continue through your verse,dope lines, this would sound dope in audio, but since its text,you still have the idea, great rhyme scheme...lol @ the environmentally friendly bar, tight finisher.."i'll put your brain on a crucifix to get your thoughts across", dope line, all in all, i liked your verse,it was harder then your oppponents, the only thing i see wrong is your lines are stretched as well, work on structure, but you take this battle with multies..no hate ..1 |
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