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SCIP vs Wicked One
Battle Rules:
8 Lines Total........... No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-11-05 at 03:26 AM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. |
SCIP has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-05 09:51 PM.
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Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-05 10:02 PM.
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Ok Im Here Verse
Stupid People: 1st Bar- Massacure is 50's new cd and Grabbin Cents/Sense and Half a Brain 50 you should get it 2nd Bar- Wicked One=has a K and o in his name and he has aliases Notorious Mc or somethin like that nuttin special 3rd Bar-Wick=Top of a Candel and if its burned out the candels finished and If he turned the Channel higher he still wouldnt be on my level you get it 4th Bar- He has Game as his Avi and when you loose all Bills you dont have any Cents like Coins so you get it Opener: Another Massacre in the Makin, This kid Think he An Establishment, but he has 1/2 (50) the Brains even when he Grabbin-Cents(Sense) Scip's Bout Ta Hand out a K.O, Cuz Just Read-His-Name, He has many aliases so who ever I hit, shit either Notorious or Wicked they'll all Bleed-The-Same This cat will never Be on the Same Level even if he Turned The Channel, cuz I'll Light Up Wick andEnd His Career Like Burning Candels Finisher: He Has no Game, This Kids Shit is Generic like his Cd's Being Sold On the Black-Wall-Street, fuck bills this kid cant swing Cents like loosin All-Keeps |
The only thing this dudes pushin is penis in rectum...
I wrecked him, motherfuckers i straight disrespect him... Ur lame and shitty, u get jumped everywhere u go so u constantly changing cities... Ur corny rhymes are the same as Diddy's, after i bust shots at ya you'll be apologizing like Game and 50... Please kid u could have Jonny Cochran write your battle, you couldn't defeat me... I'ma beat this bitch if he drops a "Line" like what Bobby does Whitney... Iam done with this bitch, to hold me back is like keeping anthrax in a glass... Dropin it 50 stories and thinkin it won't kill your ass... |
how teh fuck u get into the Establishment damn uppin for votes please
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Voted For: Wicked One
ok this was a short 8 line battle not much to say........ scip - ummm.....you had regular played punches......you got me to laugh once so that was coo....but dog dont explain your punches......and definatley dont explain your punches before we read them......but you had bad structer......and no multies or anything else...... Wicked - this was ok nuttin special.....good multies.....well better than his cuz he has none....but better structer...lines were a lil stretched....but a better verse than his....... v/ wicked |
Voted For: Wicked One
I didnt really understand what SCIP was saying the way he was writing...both of you didnt have good flow....and what the hell is with all this 50 cent talk? anyways big up to both, but fopr mt i felt wicked one won |
Voted For: SCIP
wicked one ya verse was weak dogs sorry no hate this wasnt no vet verse or close to it... The only thing this dudes pushin is penis in rectum... I wrecked him, motherfuckers i straight disrespect him... Ur lame and shitty, u get jumped everywhere u go so u constantly changing cities... Ur corny rhymes are the same as Diddy's, after i bust shots at ya you'll be apologizing like Game and 50... WTF WAS U THINKING??? no hate cuz honestly this isnt a hate vote its the truth u came harder then this befor so what happen?? flow was decent, punches was weak, word-play aint work just a weak verse kid sorry.... 4.0/10 scip ya verse was good soild.... good punches, nice wordplay and flow was on-point u did ya thing playa... Another Massacre in the Makin, This kid Think he An Establishment, but he has 1/2 (50) the Brains even when he Grabbin-Cents(Sense) ^^ thats tight good shit... This cat will never Be on the Same Level even if he Turned The Channel, cuz I'll Light Up Wick andEnd His Career Like Burning Candels ^^ danm good again... u had a hella drop fam word nice shit to bad i forgot what was ya other alias was danm??? but anyways u still won... 9.0/10 |
i dont got an alias Im Scip IE uppin for some votes kids
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Voted For: SCIP
Scip gets this 1 for punches and wordlay...his punches were more thought out...and there was wordplay in every line...his barz were a little stretched...but not stretched to the point that u couldnt read it...u should try usin multies in ur verses...this will help alot wit ur structure... wicked one had a tite verse...but it was too simple...the punches were a little played...and his multies were awkward...but it was good overall...work on flow... v/ SCIP |
This was feedback posted for SCIP
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haha I didnt bite cuz I keyed my shit up and havent looked for personals on this fool
IDK how my shit looks liek his but its the same concept but not the same exact lines so fuck off X |
anyways uppin fuckerz get some fuckin decent votes
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Voted For: Wicked One
O alright nice battle here good punches throwing from different directions.......but wicked got this......fix strucuture wicked mane. Vote removed |
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